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EyeZ street geist
Member since December 4, 2007
Member for 18 years, 6 months
"Just Another Day"
Closing the door to another day
I look back on my old ways
I wonder what I did to deserve such hate
And if this pain, is my sure fate?
All these endless nights of tears
When will I be saved from my fears
Why have I always been on my own
A little girl, forced to be grown
"I love you," are words I no longer hear
And if I do, they are no longer sincere
I'm on my own, I have to fight
Maybe soon, the darkness will turn to light
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People see me and they don't know my pain
So I hide it, and my tears must refrain
Sometimes I wonder, am I even sane?
Hopefully there is something left for me to gain.
EyeZ street geist’s timeline
- December 2022
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03 SatAnniversary
15 years of membership
- December 2017
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03 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2012
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03 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2010
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02 TueReceived a critique
on "Just Another Day" from @magics02
"Sometimes I wonder, am I even sane? Hopefully there is something left for me to gain Your song, your way and yes you have someting left to gain and that is your writing. Truly like this one friend. xoxoxoox magics02 Lea…" - February 2010
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28 Sun
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27 SatReceived a critique
on "Hope of Children's Dreams" from @xena465
"Brilliant and very compassionate...you don't sound to me like a bad guy...look inside yourself and drag that nice guy to the surface. Rosina xena465" -
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23 Tue
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19 FriPosted a poem
Thank you for my smile.
" Slowly, she awoke to another day. Nothing was special about this day. Blinded from the past that haunts her dreams, she smiled. She smiled the smile that she has known all to long. The smile that covers all the pain, the sorrow, the reality that is hers. Nobody knows how fake this smile truly is, they go about their day, thankful her smile exists." -
15 MonHighest posting month
February 2010 — 9 poems
- December 2008
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03 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2007
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04 TueFirst publication
When I
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04 TueFirst critique offered
on "Voices Seen" by @IKnowNoBox
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03 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I am very unique, lived a real hard life, and I keep on living
Location: California, USA
Sylvia Plath
Dickinson
Shakespeare
Rudyard Kippling
and others
Recent Work
"Just Another Day"
"Comfort in Rain"
Thank you for my smile.
"Snow"
"If..."
"Hope of Children's Dreams"
"I missed you today"
"Good-bye, I found Hope"
Mr. Large & In-Charge
What the angels said
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