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"Snow"
Beautiful and inviting, suggests purity
Cold and heavy, a blanket of uncertainty
Soft, gentle flakes fall from the sky
Gathered on the floor chilling our lives
Dangerously beautiful as it crashes down the mountain side
Almost as if symbolizing the pain an beauty in life
The cold invites me in, as it is familiar to me
How wonderful warmth must be, but cold is all I dream.
The blanket falls on the trees, as if a fresh start
When the sun comes, we are reminded of parts
Slowly I allow the beauty to unfold
Recognize the individual flakes as they mold
Amazing how free you feel, as you walk across
The new ground, embracing all the frost
Breathe the cold, crisp new air, breathe
Feel the chill, embrace the will, just stand still
In the snow, I allow my soul to feel
The sparkle of the ice as it melts in the sun
The glint of something special ….
It's a newfound beauty your soul has won.
Critiques
Ink Dragon
16 years 3 months ago
Hi EyeZ,
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
I agree with Nina this is a