chumfin

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COME BACK HOME!

Posted Dec 31, 2012 · 53 lines · 4 critiques

COME BACK HOME!

Moment you made me, your love destination
I knew heaven had lost an angel for my sake
Nothing I dread like missing and losing you.

Waking up and knowing
You are not by me hurts like
A million arrows to my soul
Yes! I did hurt you with one
But now! I bleed from too many
Shots from your innocence
Darling save my heart!

Come see the pain in my heart
It bleeds with guilt

My wife my life

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Too bad I messed up
But for the angel that you are
I cling to the robe of your mercy
Shower me with forgiveness

Just sprinkle it
On my restless heart

Darlings hate me not
Condemn me not
Pray for me more,
But please love me most

I swear to defend my vows to you
Uphold it strongly like its sword
Even in my weakness
Mortal I am

Come home, my queen!
A palace is not a home without you
My queen, come home!
My love!

I so need you to make
Me your best half
I owe you love
So endless, I can’t pay,
Heaven sure will help

My queen angel
Come home!
Just come home
To guide me
Out of fault into my self
You alone is my true love
The love of my life

Come home, my wife! It’s been
A life time without you
Come home to me baby!
We belong together always
I love you.

JOSEPH FELIX OSAEGHEMEDE
[email protected]
+2348037825027
Written :8th July 2011 ,8pm- 9:25pm

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January 2013
11 Fri

Received a critique
on COME BACK HOME! from @Dr Rotimi
"Great poetry."
01 Tue

Received a critique
on COME BACK HOME! from @weirdelf
"it's Felix, isn't it? A long time since you posted. A little hint about this poem. There is a book called "Damned Whores & God's Police" by Anne Summers. Women don't like to be treated as goddesses, or whores or neglect…"
December 2012
31 Mon

Critiqued
"christmas" by @judyanne
"i wish mary read how you summerised all her travails in on poet short brief,"
31 Mon

Critiqued
"THE CHICK" by @Dr Rotimi
"wellcome to neopoet, its really good to have you here in our midst. i like your oem and they are very fascinating. lets see and read more of you bro."
31 Mon

Critiqued
"Once, I Spied a Rainbow" by @docmaverick
"fantastic poem, i guess this is the first am reading from you. good work"
31 Mon

Posted a poem
COME BACK HOME!
"COME BACK HOME!"
Open thread 53 lines
March 2011
13 Sun

Received a critique
on THIS IS IT! from @magics02
"Well hello there friend and I am falling asleep at net now so I will bookmark this and check it out later. I wondered if you were sitll here or not? Blessings to you Mona Magics"
11 Fri

Posted a poem
THIS IS IT!
"THIS IS IT!"
Open thread 50 lines
February 2011
18 Fri

Critiqued
"Smile Said The Rose" by @magics02
"perfect imagery you made with this poem"
18 Fri

Critiqued
"Happy New Year Neopoet!" by @mona
"happy new year , nice write."
18 Fri

Received a critique
on SMILE OF A CHILD from @Kailashana2
"Chumfin, welcome back again. You have a lot of good stuff to say, but it's not poetic, imo. If only you could show and not tell. Let your heart speak, not your mind and then write your feelings not your thoughts. Especi…"
17 Thu

Posted a poem
SMILE OF A CHILD
"“Its just extending your arm in love it takes for the smile of a child to blossom “"
Open thread 57 lines
January 2011
21 Fri

Received a critique
on GOODLUCK A NATION? from @mona
"nice to seya again"
21 Fri

Received a critique
on GOODLUCK A NATION? from @Kailashana2
"Welcome back!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And how did Mr. Goodluck Ebele Jonathan receive your poem? ~A"
21 Fri

Posted a poem
GOODLUCK A NATION?
"GOODLUCK A NATION?"
Open thread 36 lines
July 2010
17 Sat

Critiqued
"Mia Mona" by @hobo
"mona you are very lucky to have this in you name, you deserve this. enjoy the moments chumfin"
17 Sat

Critiqued
"Mia Mona" by @hobo
"this should not cause any storm in here, this is a great poem for a lady i have so much respect for. hobo you did a great piece for this arabian queen here. thank you for this. it show you r fine heart. regards chumfin"
17 Sat

Critiqued
"I DON'T WANNA BE A REBEL" by @Professor Purple
"thank you so much for your understanding, i much appreciate this.you do have a great mind for humanity, one love. chumfin"
12 Mon

Received a critique
on SONS MANIFEST! from @magics02
"Very nice and I am late to your writes. This sang to me like a song from the choir. Have you been working on a book to submit? I really like this one and sorry I have not been to your page in a while. It is hard for me…"
08 Thu

Received a critique
on SWEET TOMORROW!!!! from @Mari Shine
"Dear Chumfin, Thank You so very much for your most kind words. My dear fellow poet, you are far ahead of me and reading your work is always so inspiring. You are a fine Master Craftsman and a brilliant Wordsmith. I lear…"
June 2010
08 Tue

Posted a poem
SONS MANIFEST!
"                                        "
Open thread 82 lines
May 2010
28 Fri

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ENDLESS!
"ENDLESS!"
Open thread 54 lines
27 Thu

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THE AFRICAN CHILD!
"THE AFRICAN CHILD!     Specie with a complex destiny"
Open thread 78 lines
24 Mon

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GRACE!
"GRACE!"
Open thread 61 lines
08 Sat

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MY CONCLUSION
"MY CONCLUSION               Habakuk: 3 verse 17 -19. (Holy bible)"
Open thread 70 lines
06 Thu

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RAIDS ON AIDS!!!
"RAID ON AIDS"
Open thread 73 lines
05 Wed

Posted a poem
AFRICA! A DARK CONTINENT?
"AFRICA! A DARK CONTINENT?"
Open thread 101 lines
03 Mon

Posted a poem
BEAUTY FROM BADAGRY!!!
""BADAGRY, is a coastal town is the outskirt of LAGOS STATE IN NIGERIA, boarder town between Nigeria and Benin  republic., this town was a SLAVE TRADE  DEPARTURE POINT, Lots of our ancestor crossed to the new world from BADAGRY"    "
Open thread 87 lines
March 2010
30 Tue

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OUR GOD REIGNS!!!

74 critiques to date.
July 2009
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Anniversary
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June 2009
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First critique offered
on "teardrops from my pen" by @emeka ozurumba
September 2008
15 Mon

Highest posting month
September 2008 — 13 poems
July 2008
23 Wed

First publication
ON EAGLE'S WING
22 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

"Am working hard to make humanity smile and be remembered"

I am Proudly NIGERIAN, a Political Scientist, Poet ,a Christian who loves GOD passionately.
Ex Paramilitary Officer (NavY, Lieutenant).
A general business enthusiast.
Am friendly ,adventurous, honest, and above all humble.
There is more good about me than what you may be reading here now.
shalom.JESUS IS LORD

Location: NGA

Favorite Poets

KinG DaviD Psalms

King Solomon songs

maya angelou

and all the great poets i have ever meet.

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15 years of membership

10 years of membership

5 years of membership

on COME BACK HOME! from @Dr Rotimi

on COME BACK HOME! from @weirdelf

"christmas" by @judyanne

"THE CHICK" by @Dr Rotimi

"Once, I Spied a Rainbow" by @docmaverick

on THIS IS IT! from @magics02

"Smile Said The Rose" by @magics02

"Happy New Year Neopoet!" by @mona

on SMILE OF A CHILD from @Kailashana2

on GOODLUCK A NATION? from @mona

on GOODLUCK A NATION? from @Kailashana2

"Mia Mona" by @hobo

"Mia Mona" by @hobo

"I DON'T WANNA BE A REBEL" by @Professor Purple

on SONS MANIFEST! from @magics02

on SWEET TOMORROW!!!! from @Mari Shine

One year of membership

on "teardrops from my pen" by @emeka ozurumba

September 2008 — 13 poems

Membership begins

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