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MY CONCLUSION


MY CONCLUSION               Habakuk: 3 verse 17 -19. (Holy bible)

Question piling upon questions

Contend space in my mind, all begging recognition

Choking my hearts in toxic pains

Yet! Answers, my little brain

Struggle to generate,             

My head powerless to make a think

Resorting to all sorts

I can’t even touch comfort and smile.                

Will it ever be well?

 

Dreams solid as charcoal, but charred

Hope rooted firm like iroko is fell 

Anxiety, pumps my pressure to its peak

Depression’s cloak, darkens my vision

What is the chance that it will always be well?

 

All my toil resembles a pain spoil

Life’s friction my strength can’t even oil

Ignoring scorn, I till the soil,

With so much ado, in pain I cry

Why is life’s cold embrace, suffocating to kill?

Entreating relief, do I need a pill?

 I guess its kill, ushers my exit.

I detest a weak exit,

Can’t it be ever be well for me?

 

Yes! Much as am plundered,

 I love him

 

Losing my tears as rain drops

Truly! The me, longs for him

Enduring hungers fangs,

To him I submit in fast

When my being faints for strength

With the remain I cling on to him

Suffering many falls

 My obedience raises me for his call

 

Concluding all almost a loss,

My faith, yet declares

It is well!

Though in travail, it is well!

Standing in life’s unfair court

My soul will chant

It is well!

It is well, is all my voice will say.

 

 

In the entire whole,

He remains, he is

Yes, the I am

Sovereign, in all sovereign

King like none other king,

Yes! The majestic champion.

With him alone,

it is well with me


sure as he lives, 

my tomorrow is a guarantee

my God always he will be


This is my conclusion.

 



 AUTHOR: FELIX JOSEPH OSAEGHEMEDE

WRITTEN:10TH MARCH 2010.

EMAIL:[email protected], +2348037825027: 

written: 12 

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— chumfin, May 08, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

True Faith

A strong-minded well written poem Chumfin...superb. Rosina xena465
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

great warrior

thank you my dearest friend, i really appreciate you coming by to read this, much love to you. chumfin
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 1 month ago

lovely write

Lovely write chumfin. I love the faith in it Saeva Scaeva ( Latin) " Rampant she-devil"
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

very beautiully written

Thank you for reading and responding to my poems. I am here to check out some of yours as well. I really enjoyed this one. It's beautifully written. I love the ending a lot. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
chumfin

chumfin

15 years 11 months ago

dear Faith, i have faith in

dear Faith, i have faith in the sincerity of your comments on my poems, and am very honored to have the calibre of your personality, to find my poem good enough for your liking. its a great honor to me. regards chumfin