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RAIDS ON AIDS!!!


RAID ON AIDS

 

Methuselah’s age, wisdom produce

Longevity a dream comes true

Humanity, cuts a perfect picture

Our existence, evolved in pleasure

A good life, mortals must treasure

Be very shrewd, to mark a measure

Riotous life, concludes your closure

By a dove’s wisdom, uphold a future.

 

 

Productivity groans in decline

Man’s extinction draws its line

A universal pandemic, in every clime

Reckless mortals, faintly holds to time

Time ticking, the end is bleak

Many a robust dream fades in a leak

Can we then pitch a niche at the peak?

A many vision with hearts, it breaks

The very raid, is coming from aids

A careless lay, you are sealed with aids

Jailing the libido, then be spared the raid

 

 

Raid on aids

Not just an African affair

With a universal sense, all must be fair

This fight involves, plenty conscious pair

The rampaging aids is not a friend

Yes! Viciously a means to an end

Let’s unleash a raid on aids,

Indeed the monstrous aid is on the raid

 

 

The aids raid may put up a scare

Raid on aids, let’s charge in offense

A surprise attack, it beats a retreat

Raiding the monster, will save our world

A whole new world free from its raid

Moral adherence, tames this beast

Abstinence pairing fidelity makes the champion

Be very smart, guarding your loins club.

One casual adventure, will perhaps seal your fate

 

 

I dare, but ask?

Should we raid the aids?

Who can dare its geometric raid?

Aids indeed, deserves the raid

For humanity sake, lets put paid on the aids

An all out war against the aids

A raid on aids, will aid the world

 

 

Raid the aids, only not on the pages

Actors war better on stage

Let’s wear rage,

And confine it, to its cages

So humanity will live through the ages.

 

 

 

A  dedication to humanity’s global fight against the deadly scourge,  AIDS,

 

Author: the Holy Spirit.

              Felix Joseph Osaeghemede

             [email protected];

             +2348037825027.

 

Written: 1/12/2007, 10:45am – 2:10pm

 

 


— chumfin, May 06, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: KinG DaviD Psalms, King Solomon songs, maya angelou, and all the great poets i have ever meet.

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chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

heal the world.

Ravens nest, thank you for this comments. i appreciate you coming to read it. its all for humanity. i have seen this aids kill person i know. chumfin
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

I remember when it was a

I remember when it was a *scourge from God* to punish *homosexuals*. I remember when men were ostracized and no one wanted to be near those infected since most folks were ignorant on its transmission; even health workers were afraid. Bless all those who fight the ignorance and do the teaching, the bathing and the feeding of the sick and the dying. Too many have died, it's as though fear itself has become manifest as the disease. ~Anna "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

we must heal the world.

thank you so much for coming by to read this piece, i wrote for all humanity, this scourge is so real , i have seen and know countless persons it has come to consume. best regards to you. chumfin
loved

loved

16 years ago

ur a soldier

.... U know that everything is Fair in war and peace, Aids at least are for free Why not add to ones list Anything free makes One feel free Be it aids Ah! Joy They say all say enjoy But oh! Boy you are right With capitals AIDS and HIV WE MUST FIGHT AND A stage a RAGE…or raids That alone would be, Yes my boy, Just about right LOVED IS AGAINST ALL AIDS HIV and STD's
loved

loved

16 years ago

u deserve it

....soldier i know how it feels being at WAR.... fight and yet be DEPRIVED of basic life's needs sex BUT CAN'T HELP IT IN WW11 THERE WERE VAKAII'S... HOPE SPELLING IS CORRECT... IN ANY CASE THEY PROVIDED SEX there were std's then NO AIDS/HIV as of today have a good day LOVED ALL THE WAY
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Mari Shine

15 years 11 months ago

What a wonderful poem you

What a wonderful poem you have penned here Chumfin, so adeptly! Your knowledge of so many global events are 'mind boggling' and this very indepth write is no exception. You are so right in all that you have expressed within the poem and your wisdom shines through the lines, brighter than the brightest star which has ever shone. I pray a day will dawn, when the world will be 'Aids Free'. So many beautiful people have died from it, it is so, so sad. This super inking will raise each reader's awareness of the issue and you have so kindly brought it to my attention, raising my awareness, through reading this great poem. Thank You so very much for sharing it with me.
chumfin

chumfin

15 years 11 months ago

DEAR MARI SHINE. thank you

DEAR MARI SHINE. thank you so much for the comments, your sincerity shines in all you have said so far, i greatly appreciate you from here in NIGERIA. I send you warm greetings from AFRICA. CHUMFIN