artygirl87

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Gossip

Posted Apr 8, 2011 · 24 lines · 1 critiques

The sun chases away the darkness,
The rain cleanses the earth,
The moonlight lights a path,
A journey from death to birth.

New eyes,
Untarnished soul,
Making one see the picture
is now finally whole.

You know who you are,
You speak from the heart,
Ignore those that try
to tear you apart.

The vulchers are jealous,
You they cannot see,

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All they see is gossip,
To spread forth they feel the need.

Hold your head high,
Do yourself proud,
Ignore those that voice opinions,
Those that get loud.

Listen to your inner voice,
The light among the dark,
Listen to yourself,
Before you let others take part.

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08 Fri

Received a critique
on Scared and Alone from @ziggy
"hi there few suggestions for you to chew on "But it is, it's here, A part of your life, Not here to get you into strife." ,,,,,,,,I was thinking "but so it is here a part of your life not hear for strive, ,,,,,,, "You'r…"
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Received a critique
on Gossip from @Eduardo Cruz
"Gossip is always about the people who gossip it is never about you. It's about there own domestication, there dream not yours. So live your dream and let them live there dream the world has given them. You are free of t…"
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Gossip
"The sun chases away the darkness,"
Open thread 24 lines
08 Fri

Posted a poem
Scared and Alone
"You hold your head down,"
Open thread 32 lines
March 2011
27 Sun

Received a critique
on R.I.P from @magics02
"This poem was a hard one to digest but very thought out feelings placed to pen here. I feel your sadness and I am also holding someones hand that is so close to me and know that when he goes to sleep for the last time I…"
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"The sun lights the darkness,"
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Now I Understand
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Gossip

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on Scared and Alone from @ziggy

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Gossip

Scared and Alone

on R.I.P from @magics02

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April 2010 — 5 poems

I Know You Too Well

Now I Understand

on "The Circle" by @judyanne

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