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Trouble
Member since March 17, 2017
Member for 9 years, 2 months
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We all choose to love
We all choose to love.
Doubts and fears!
The with the memories, of dried up tears.
The choices we made for love.
Always unclear!
We test each relationship.
Too love sincere.
Because of pain, we hide the austere
Wanting companionship gives a purpose
To the words we need to hear.
Trouble’s timeline
- June 2026
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04 ThuCritiqued
"To kill a man ll" by @Cpwe Skele
"I love the flow of this poem the words kinda sing in the rhymes sorry I can't give you any technical advice" -
02 TueReceived a critique
on If my face didn’t have a name from @Cpwe Skele
"Trouble, Clear and concise, I like how you were able to vividly describe your current/past state of mind. I would love to read more—if you would ever care to expand on it. Watch out for grammar. Thank you, Cpwe" - May 2026
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- March 2026
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27 FriNew follower
@Lavender
- October 2025
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31 FriNew follower
@Trouble
- April 2025
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- June 2024
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- March 2024
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- February 2024
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01 ThuReceived a critique
on I am no more or no less from @Geezer
"get to reply sooner, but one thing and another... Ya know how it goes. So glad to have one of my old compadres back on the site. I hope to see you a lot more. We have grown a bunch bro. Be glad to see you take advantage…" - January 2024
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30 TueReceived a critique
on I am no more or no less from @Candlewitch
"first point: you have the title of the poem on it three times, which distracts form the enjoyment of reading. (and I did enjoy it!) Great ideas employed. good language usage. The final line rings a note of discord... it…" -
30 TueReceived a critique
on I am no more or no less from @Geezer
"with the AI on the points discussed but feel that you have made a good connection between the reader and the poet. Work on that meter. ~ Geezer. ." -
30 TueReceived a critique
on I am no more or no less from @Lavender
"This is soft and quiet. An "in the moment" reflection. So many deep thoughts, but a universal, simple affirmation. May I suggest making the sentences even in length? It would make the poem a bit easier for the reader to…" -
29 Mon
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25 ThuCritiqued
"Romeo and Juiliette" by @Shelby Pryor
"I loved the rhythm of the words it was easy to read while keeping me interested in the subject of the poem" -
24 WedReceived a critique
on TO BE A MOUNTAIN from @Sen99
"Nature is the metaphor, liked the concision and wisdom in this poem. Thanks" -
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- April 2023
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- March 2023
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29 WedCritiqued
"Yours or Mine" by @RoseBlack
"My name is pressley nice to meet you. Reading your poem i had to add a comment . The structure of your poem opened my mind because of the first paragraph it was like a review to a movie. And you didn't waste time with y…" -
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- November 2022
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19 SatCritiqued
"A POEM TO MY CHILDHOOD SELF" by @Mr joghe
"I think the last paragraph should've been the first one to me these words would have opened up more of a meaning for the reader to follow. Peace and blessings to you But question was the teacher your mate" -
19 SatCritiqued
"A POEM TO MY CHILDHOOD SELF" by @Mr joghe
"I think the last paragraph should've been the first one to me these words would have opened up more of a meaning for the reader to follow. Peace and blessings to you But question was the teacher your mate" -
17 ThuCritiqued
"I Am Done" by @Mr joghe
"To you my friend I think this poem has a powerful main theme. But Im missing the music . I am done walking the jungle Like the pilgrim of the southern On the pebbles of the river Under the shadow of the trees give me co…" -
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- October 2022
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23 SunNew follower
@Mr joghe
- September 2022
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09 FriCritiqued
"Silence Of The Truth" by @Depressed 1
"I loved your flow it was easy to read but my mind keep wondering whom the word THEY meant was it the government or a person I think if you identified this it would have given me a little more direction" - July 2022
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15 FriHighest posting month
July 2022 — 5 poems
- March 2022
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17 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2018
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17 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2017
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30 Thu
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19 SunFirst critique offered
on "Merry Christmas Mama ( I post this every year)One more year..." by @Rett
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17 FriFirst publication
What the hell (since unpublished)
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17 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
To thy own self be true.
Location: Detroit Mi
Favorite Poets
my poets are john Coltrane and Sarah Vaughan OK they are not poets but their music is reason that I write . I want my poetry to flow like their music
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