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Trouble
Member since March 17, 2017
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Every minute a poet is born
Every minute a poet is born
We as poets
writing sometime alone
can see the colors of a kaleidoscope
made into a endless poems .
Sifted , poured for the readers too enjoy
This is a hope filling the poets void
Without pasteurization
they write the righteous words of exculpation .
They taint the freedom of speech with their own lost delegation.
Out numberedthe poets that are true.
They are commended to purity composing poetry with simply the truth
foul language they seldom use
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Never with sexual contents , will they seduce
We all should be proud of them
And stand by their transcend
Their poems will take us to a limitless end
Trouble’s timeline
- July 2026
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21 TueCritiqued
"Where does it hurt?" by @Jane
"hello Jane my name is trouble or pressley nice to meet you and welcome too Neopoet. I loved this poem it was easy too follow also it had just enough rhymes that it added more enjoyment for the readers l won' t Critique…" -
19 SunReceived a critique
on Every minute a poet is born from @Human Cultist
"Firstly. Good poem! The concept’s elegant and beautiful. The idea that every minute a new wielder of the pen is born into this sea of brute headed men, is simply exquisite. The title directly is the essence of the poem…" -
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16 ThuCritiqued
"Beating the Statistics: Children of Addicts" by @AbsentMinded
"hey AbsentMinded nice to meet you my name is trouble I felt you emotion in your poem but in the first line When you dearly know an addict there are few things you start and stop expecting, with no condition. I would con…" -
10 FriCritiqued
"Winters Trees" by @MLucas04
"I loved the way you laid this poem on paper it's something about the visual interaction with nature that's captivating a flower grows like love grows leaves fall just like feelings fall great poem Trouble" -
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04 SatCritiqued
"Into the eye of innocence " by @Tigger Kaz
"This poem was super smooth to read i loved the personification of your emotions into a physical event I pleasure to read Always a friend Trouble" -
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01 WedReceived a critique
on A letter too my future self from @alicespagnol7
""Constantly dreaming about the letter, too my future self I wrote." This part you forced the rhyme, it reads weird and it attracts attention to itself rather than the content. "I’m thirteen now I often Think about that…" -
01 WedCritiqued
"Live Life" by @streshenkofftheresa
"This was so easy to read because it flowed with the structure of the poem I didn't have to stop and think about the direction because it was constant Good piece to read Trouble" -
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- June 2026
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29 MonCritiqued
"If Monday Was a Person." by @Alex Tanner
"Very clever the way you wrote this Good too read I write for peace and not for pride Trouble" -
27 SatCritiqued
"Evil is Her " by @juliemakhoul3458
"I appreciate the way this poem flowed Their is so many poems here about anger, violence or the darker side of life but your poem had a balance that kept me reading more i guess it was like a story about yoursel rather t…" -
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22 MonNew follower
@alicespagnol7
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21 SunCritiqued
"Once, in a Blue Moon..." by @Geezer
"I definitely could relate with the colors and the mixture of music kinda got lost with some of the stanza maybe I'm not smart enough I'll read it again maybe with a potato in my cup My friend too the end" -
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19 FriNew follower
@Tink
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19 FriReceived a critique
on Mentalities from @Tink
"This is an interesting view. I have to think on this one!! Great job! Live, Love & Laugh. (and don't forget to Write!!) Yours in Ink, Tink" -
19 FriReceived a critique
on Mentalities from @streshenkofftheresa
"I think this is a beautiful write great job very well done" -
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10 WedReceived a critique
on We all choose to love from @Geezer
"while I agree with the A.I. in general, there are aspects that I think have more merit than given credit for.I think that to refine the language further in some spots, would take away from the raw dialog. I do agree tha…" -
07 SunReceived a critique
on Monday was her name from @patrickgadoury
"Writing Monday poetry on a Sunday feels personally rude, so thanks for that. Jokes aside, I like the idea here. Monday almost feels like a person promising a better life, while Sunday is the last honest room before the…" -
07 SunNew follower
@patrickgadoury
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07 SunReceived a critique
on STUPID OR IGNORANCE STUPID OR IGNORANCE from @patrickgadoury
"This feels like a rough thought-poem fighting with itself, which kind of fits the title. The line that hit hardest for me was “My stupidity, is my comprehension” because that actually feels like the heart of the piece…" -
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02 TueReceived a critique
on If my face didn’t have a name from @Cpwe Skele
"Trouble, Clear and concise, I like how you were able to vividly describe your current/past state of mind. I would love to read more—if you would ever care to expand on it. Watch out for grammar. Thank you, Cpwe" - May 2026
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- March 2026
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27 FriNew follower
@Lavender
- April 2025
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20 Sun
- July 2022
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15 FriHighest posting month
July 2022 — 5 poems
- March 2022
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17 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2018
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17 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2017
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30 Thu
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19 SunFirst critique offered
on "Merry Christmas Mama ( I post this every year)One more year..." by @Rett
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17 FriFirst publication
What the hell (since unpublished)
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17 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
To thy own self be true.
Location: Detroit Mi
Favorite Poets
my poets are john Coltrane and Sarah Vaughan OK they are not poets but their music is reason that I write . I want my poetry to flow like their music
Recent Work
I will stand by you
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Depression
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Believe
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I am no more or no less
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TO BE A MOUNTAIN
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Who is a friend
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Me or love
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Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| Monday was her name | 06/26 If Monday Was a Person | – |