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ROCKY Tlaelane
Member since November 12, 2025
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ocean oracle
My mare guardian true
guiding me through with a light heart
she speak wisdom in my ear so soft
steering me towards destiny keepers
she shows the way to those in need
come what may
she braid my hair with a gentle hand
braiding wisdom into each strand
she keeps secrets
loving me regardless through each life pace
knowing I oppose obedient she set me free
and raises a sword for me steadfast for me
in the midst of storm she calms the seas
a shelter from wind a refuge for me
her unwavering love cures me
a bond so true her love is pure
ROCKY Tlaelane’s timeline
- December 2025
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09 TueNew follower
@Shamo
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07 SunReceived a critique
on ocean oracle from @Leslie
"I feel this way about myself. Even though I regularly curse God, because of afflictions, He doesn't seem to notice and guides me through my storms despite! Great poem!" - November 2025
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21 Fri
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18 Tue
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17 MonReceived a critique
on Deep bronze flavour from @mark
"This is an absolutely stunning and resonant poem that uses the sweet, complex imagery of "caramel" to explore the painful realities of identity, marginalization, and resilience. The opening lines immediately draw us in…" -
17 MonCritiqued
"My little Barbie doll" by @poetaldo
"The teen in me just resurfaced from reading this Sending love" -
17 MonCritiqued
"Origin Story" by @BlueSkies
"It's funny how this resonated with me I got a pen without a book the only thing I was taught was how to hold it...lol I remember my brother chasing me because I stole his science noted It's beautiful how being imperfect…" -
17 Mon
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15 SatHighest posting month
November 2025 — 5 poems
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14 Fri
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14 FriCritiqued
"«Much Better, Isn’t It?" by @Niko Knightley
"My mom says religion is what Makes your heart light If painting smile Setting heart free do the work for you Cheers mama I see a young person in every line is great" -
14 FriCritiqued
"FLIM-FLAM SAM" by @Triskelion
"In South Africa right now we running a movement for GBV the very same government officials stated that we are embarassing them Scams of çommand' they refused to accept our petition" -
14 FriCritiqued
"From my own perspective!" by @Leslie
"As a young woman Who spent her time with what may come I found myself thinking is it worth I love how it flows with emotional intelligency" -
14 FriFirst critique offered
on "From my own perspective!" by @Leslie
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14 FriReceived a critique
on Abuse we bare from @Candlewitch
"As a victim of mental, emotional and physical abuse (and torture) i can heavily relate to your poem! I agree with Geezer completely... these lines are so very true: We are programmed that, it's okay to suffer in the han…" -
13 ThuReceived a critique
on Abuse we bare from @Geezer
"emphasized the abuse felt by many women all over the world. Men who rule by fear and repression, are rarely in control of themselves. I salute you and those women who are abused, both mentally and physically. Teach your…" -
13 ThuReceived a critique
on Abuse we bare from @Clentin
"Only one poem may be submitted for any contest, please choose which one you want for the contest" -
13 Thu
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13 ThuReceived a critique
on Me painter from @Clentin
"Liked your poem. Keep writing View other poets, comment on their Oems!" -
12 WedReceived a critique
on Me painter from @Leslie
"I love the mystical description and am aware of what the third eye is and means. Great write! If you have time please read and comment on mine! Leslie." -
12 WedFirst publication
Me painter
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12 Wed
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12 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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