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Psyve
Member since March 10, 2007
Member for 19 years, 2 months
HANGOVER (updated)
It ain't fair that you're still on my mind
It ain't fair, though you don't try
Damn! Damn! Damn!...here you are again
I am what I am, and I ain't what I ain't…
And though I've put you down in music and I've put you down in paint
You know I've never really put you down at all
And though the words and music seem to be a little quaint,
It's rock 'n' roll, it's rock 'n' roll…
© Cyrus Dali Vesuvala
You can watch a performance of this song recorded at home recenttly at this link
https://fb.watch/jshEycOCOR/
Psyve’s timeline
- March 2023
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23 Thu
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22 Wed
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19 SunReceived a critique
on TRIGGER from @RoseBlack
"We can only hope that in the end those we loved the most are aware but I know myself, even though I have made it a practice to say it more often in recent times, there were many years were words escaped me as well. This…" -
19 Sun
- March 2022
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09 WedAnniversary
15 years of membership
- March 2017
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09 ThuAnniversary
10 years of membership
- March 2012
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09 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2011
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23 SunReceived a critique
on AND PITY, PITY from @magics02
"Hey guy lets here this song eh? So you see, I don’t need to know your pity, Nor your reason nor your rhyme, I don’t need no one's charity, And now, baby, I don’t even need your time… I like it the poem or song if it is…" - September 2011
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04 SunReceived a critique
on FAMOUS BOYISH SMILE from @scribbler
"You see, this is where I get into trouble. I read this as straight poetry instead of lyrics of which I know even less. Even so, it seems to me the last line needs another beat or two. Of course this is reading it sans t…" - December 2010
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15 WedHighest posting month
December 2010 — 9 poems
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12 Sun
- July 2009
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11 SatFirst critique offered
on " THE HANGOVER" by @Tam the Chanter
- March 2008
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09 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2007
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12 MonFirst publication
FAREWELL TO JUNE, FAREWELL IN MARCH
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09 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 3 days later.
About Me
CYRUS DALI VESUVALA (PSYVE)
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Cyrus is a singer-songwriter from India who has been writing lyrics and music for over four decades.
Among his musical influences are Leonard Cohen, Roger Waters, Bob Dylan, Cat Stevens, CSNY, Simon & Garfunkel, the Beatles and Jim Croce, albeit not necessarily in that order.
Cyrus first picked up the guitar in 1973 and wrote his first lyric and song in 1976.
Over the years thereafter, he has gone on to write close to 80 songs, poems and musical compositions, several of which he has illustrated with original artwork also.
He has also collaborated with other musicians and lyricists located in the US, Europe and Bahrain on several songs, working sometimes as a lyricist and sometimes as a musician.
Cyrus is an architect currently living in Gurugram, near New Delhi in India. In the past, he has lived and worked in the Sultanate of Oman and in the Kingdom of Bahrain
He sometimes writes and performs under his stage-name “Psyve”.
His music can be heard as AUDIO files on Soundcloud at https://soundcloud.com/psyve
and can seen as VIDEO files on Facebook at https://tinyurl.com/Psyve-FB
Location: Asia, India, IND
Leonard Cohen
Bob Dylan
Roger Waters
Jim Croce
Paul Simon (...albeit not necessarily in that order)
Recent Work
BLOCK AND TACKLE
To a Blind Friend
ELDERBROC
BLOCK AND TACKLE
IF FLOWERS STILL BLOOM IN BEIRUT
MASK
ORPHANELL ON A RAINY DAY
APPLEWEED
CONFLUENCE
Contest Wins
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