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TW
the way to live life is 2 luv many things
Jun 05, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Unspoken Words

all the words
i never said
all the words i wished to say
all the words
i kept bottled up inside
all the words that were left unspoken
 
all the words i couldnt hide
all the words
i felt inside
all the words
i had the power to say
all the words that were left too late…
 

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Mark

Mark

18 years 11 months ago

no

You are not alone in regards to what you are saying in your poetry, in fact join the crowd as I think we all have these regrets. There is redundancy here actually quite a bit BUT in light of the poetry I think it works quite well. I like the way you are whispering here as well. Your poem was a good experience for me - Thanks, Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Mark said it right

Yes, there is a quality of whispering in your poem. We all know the feeling, well all who care. Well done. Write more.