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loveslave
Member since May 14, 2013
Member for 13 years
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Haiku no 2
Autumn leaves
floating colours
winter creeps.
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- June 2013
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07 FriReceived a critique
on Haiku no 2 from @Ian.T
"As Haiku's go this will need attention, modern English doesn't conform to the strict Japanese ways of Haiku where the syllable count is 5-7-5. But we do try to stay as close as possible to their way of writing. So a qui…" -
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- May 2013
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20 MonReceived a critique
on Mist from @eightmenout
"I see you are fairly new and asked for moderate/constructive criticism so I will try to be gentle. Please let me know if I overstep. That being said, the theme is a bit cliche as are some of the words (coffin, blood, st…" -
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14 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- November 2008
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28 FriFirst critique offered
on "Jewellery" by @Robert Melliard
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28 FriFirst publication
November
About Me
About me
I'm Scottish and proud of it. Of course I love poetry otherwise I wouldn't be on here. I love reading it and thinking about it and of course trying to create it once in a while. I don't consider myself to be a particularly talented poet and I'm sure that there are plenty of poets on here who are more talented than I am but I write honestly and from the heart so maybe I deserve a little credit for that at least?... Maybe not lol. I'm naturally drawn to anything which has a real sense of sadness and pathos and I guess my ultimate poetic ambition is to write poems which have a real sense, a true sense of sorrow and pathos about them. Well, that's a bit about me... tell me about you...
Location: Scotland
Favorite Poets
Sylvia Plath
Diamanda Galas
Stevie Smith... Carol Ann Duffy
to name but a few.
Recent Work
Haiku no 2
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Lead
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Mist
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Snow
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I have seen the Ocean.
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Ninevah
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Pericardium
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November
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