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Jun 05, 2013
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Haiku no 2
Autumn leaves
floating colours
winter creeps.
— loveslave, Jun 05, 2013
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Ian.T
13 years ago
Loveslave
As Haiku's go this will need attention, modern English doesn't conform to the strict Japanese ways of Haiku where the syllable count is 5-7-5.
But we do try to stay as close as possible to their way of writing.
So a quick sort will bring this in line to near normal Haiku writes.
Try joining Barbara's Eternal Renga section it is a good exercise of writing in the ways of Japan,
Yours Ian.T