loved

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where eternity and infinity meet

Posted Jun 23, 2014 · 38 lines · 9 critiques

Many serious thoughts …cross one’s mind
when the need draws
some say it's normal,
just wait… others shed tears
what will happen
when I'm no more!
who shall whack my back
as I whine
who will say a bloody good man divine
and who will laugh and shout aloud,
gone is the self wallowing clown
then there aren't many dirty fish
In the ocean of life,
many suffer beyond variable strife

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yet survive … some die
ere and ere…
but no one about them does care
ere they die somewhere
out where eternity meets infinity
Loved will be calling out at you
Lovedly
and so be it
a rebirth from toxic times,
when all called to say
the guy doesn't rhyme,
anyway thank goodness, he has merged,
but someone will yell,
friend , but not submerged …

till then let the twain be fixed
Eternity with infinity
between me
as I embark on a voyage beyond time
where there is no need
to be sad,
if poetry does
or does not rhyme….
Composing epicurial poetry too
is no crime…

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"Aged works" by @Ian.T
"at 72 wow you miss out on life I know guy's whose at 90 does rise and then its no surprise gals sling around the lonesome prize and the guys willingly does rise you at 72 and some bard at 27 must exchange once in a way…"
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where eternity and infinity meet
"Many serious thoughts …cross one’s mind"
Open thread 38 lines
23 Mon

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"Words From A Friend" by @alidzain
"my wall it gave me an impression whether Jess had told you about a confession that loved is a bloody whiner! Well some one else has stepped in first now I needn't thirst rest in peace till they permit me to become from…"
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"FADING TO OPAQUE edit" by @Geremia
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"BEAUTY OF DISTANCE" by @scribbler
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"NO ROOM AT THE INN" by @Geremia
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My Lovely Eyes[EDIT]
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Workshops

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The Minnow’s Shop (Beginner’s Workshop)	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2015-10-16	Concluded
Storytelling in Verse: A Study in Pink.	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2014-09-26	Concluded
THE RIGHT WORD .....Let's get started	(syllabus)	Wading Pool	Started 2013-11-25	Concluded
Eternal Renga Continues	(syllabus)	Wading Pool, Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool	Started 2012-11-07	Concluded
Eternal Renga	(syllabus)	Wading Pool, Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool	Started 2012-08-22	Concluded
Writing Forms workshop	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2011-06-23	Concluded
Cliches and their use	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2011-06-20	Concluded