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Sep 23, 2009
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My Lovely Eyes[EDIT]
My Lovely Eyes
If you can stare into my eyes
For a few moments only
You will never like
To see in anothers.
They mesmerise
With it make people's rise
Read my poem
'Ere it does rise'
It wasn’t there?
What a glaring surprise
Seeing your eyes
Now I can say
Arise
and I bet
all your lovers will
Only loving ones ,fret
You will not only rise
But make others’ arise
— loved, Sep 23, 2009
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Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years 8 months ago
response
loved
16 years 3 months ago
PLEASE DO READ AND COMMENT
loved
16 years 8 months ago
thanks