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My Lovely Eyes[EDIT]

My Lovely Eyes

 

If you can stare into my  eyes

For a few moments only

You will never like

To see in anothers.

 

They mesmerise

With it make people's rise

Read my poem


'Ere it does rise'


It wasn’t there?


What a glaring surprise

Seeing your eyes

Now I can say

Arise
and I bet
all your lovers will
Only  loving ones ,fret

You will not only rise

But make others’ arise

— loved, Sep 23, 2009

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Country/Region: ROU

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Loved

Welcome to neopoet... this is a wonderful first post ... a few technical things but no biggies ... but other than that I loved it made me think ;) lol kind regards Jayne x
loved

loved

16 years 8 months ago

response

How do you like my poem though a bit too lengthy Teenage moms Thanks and my Qs remains unanswered yet. Thanks Rgds
loved

loved

16 years 8 months ago

thanks

I have written 1160 poems for TRIOND SITE OF POETS this yearsince JAN 2009, can you help find a good publisher for free . I can't afford to print, but the Publisher could be off set in due course. Thanks again,, With best wishes and KINDEST REGARDS Loved