jtvash

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Anasthetic Claws

Posted Jun 5, 2010 · 16 lines

I write of dreams, and broken pasts

my tears mix with my ink

I write how nothing EVER lasts

and how it hurts to think

I scribble torment, pen to pads

My heartache starts to shrink

and now indifference comes on fast

and now I start to drink

The winter makes me blissfully numb

It's fitting for this cause

I take it in, and stricken dumb,

my brain gets put on pause.

And every night I do succumb

to Anasthetic Claws

Its sad, and yet it saves me from

depressions ugly jaws.

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First poem published 1 days later.
June 2010
05 Sat

Posted a poem
Anasthetic Claws
"I write of dreams, and broken pasts"
Open thread 16 lines
04 Fri

Received a critique
on Routine from @scribbler
"good flow and meter.Sad subject I hope not based in fact.......scribbler"
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Routine
"A friend of mine, is in such pain,"
Open thread 20 lines
03 Thu

Received a critique
on Poison from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. The imagery is wonderful and dark. I think this poem deserves five stars and a spotlight nomination! Always, Cat"
03 Thu

Received a critique
on Poison from @mand
"I agree with Chrys. Love Mand xxx"
03 Thu

Posted a poem
To vandals:
"The finishing has peeled away,"
Open thread 16 lines
February 2010
08 Mon

First critique offered
on "Fly" by @Kailashana
January 2010
15 Fri

First publication
Snare
15 Fri

Highest posting month
January 2010 — 7 poems

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Anasthetic Claws

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Anasthetic Claws

on Routine from @scribbler

Routine

on Poison from @Candlewitch

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To vandals:

on "Fly" by @Kailashana

Snare

January 2010 — 7 poems

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