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colourfulmary
Member since May 22, 2009
Member for 17 years, 1 month
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you know what I really think you should go
back to your ex
it's so obvious that
you've obsessed with her
like you said
she has learned to be mature
sure and your business
is making some profit
I bet she excepts you ok now
I sincerely hope
you guys spend life happy ever after
I am so going to pick up
my stuff from your place tomorrow
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One year of membership
- August 2009
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05 WedReceived a critique
on invitation from @poewriter58
"Now the clarity is there. I see where this was going. I like the improvement and the fact that you have just left an opening for perhaps a follow up poem as a continuation of an encounter. Nicely done Chrys" -
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11 ThuReceived a critique
on invitation from @poewriter58
"did you mean was I given another chance without extending this poem it is difficult to understand where you were going with this perhaps if you added to it to give it more clarity Chrys" -
02 TueReceived a critique
on encounter - first and last from @Rett
"I like this. It is a tad rough but very charming and sincere. The structure is a bit odd, but all in all, I really do like this. Kudos! Good one. Respectfully, Rett: "God made an idiot for practice, then he made a schoo…" -
02 TueReceived a critique
on encounter - first and last from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"This came as strange, but a good strange...an intriguing kind of write...almost a vagabond like feel. Found a few rough spots. "Your arms fold around own abdomen", I found that a little bit of an awkward line to read. B…" - May 2009
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23 SatCritiqued
"Eyes Of Black" by @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
"Steven, Thank you for the advice. You are the second person told me to relax recently. Steven is a good name. Wish I could offer my real name to you but I need to keep reminding me what I lost. I am going to change my p…" -
23 SatCritiqued
"Eyes Of Black" by @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
"I just wanted to say that you remind me my native american friend who lives in Salt Lake. He is a good person. Sometime I wish he has good night sleep. And hope you do too. That's what I felt after reading your work. Ve…" -
23 SatFirst critique offered
on "Eyes Of Black" by @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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22 FriFirst publication
This guy
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21 ThuJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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