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colourfulmary
May 22, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

This guy


This guy I met three weeks ago

He asked me if I wanted to be his fuck buddy

I know the word cos my flatmate use to have one of those

She came to visit my flatmate always late nite

Never get introduced to any of us in the house

And she had to leave really early morning

I am not even sure she has used our bathroom ever

 

This guy I met three weeks ago

He wants me to be his fuck buddy

He doesn't know me tho



— colourfulmary, May 22, 2009

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years ago

This is deceptively deep

I love it. That's what poetry is all about, saying so much with so little. Would consider making flat mate one word and cose to cos. cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.
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colourfulmary

17 years ago

I have made changes

Thanks for your comment, weirdelf. I have made changes as you suggested. Colloquial can be a bit of murmur, shouldn't be too many. I am grad to hear you like it. This guy is my 'Muse', my itchy spot at a moment. hehe Very best,