Picasso's

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet’s AI:

The poem's central tension — that an artist's value is extracted after death, leaving the creator with nothing — is a genuinely interesting subject, and the closing line "Your mind...created theirs" lands with quiet force as its strongest moment, suggesting that the artist's imagination literally gave rise to others' wealth and taste.

Several elements work against the poem's impact, though. The opening "How I pitty thee" announces its emotion too directly and also contains a spelling error that undercuts the poem's authority before it gets started; showing the pity through image or detail would be more affecting than declaring it. The rhyme scheme (death/wealth/share/theirs) feels inconsistent and at times forced, pulling the lines toward awkward constructions like "They shall spend that wealth" that read as filler rather than meaning. "Rainbow hands" is the poem's most vivid image, but it arrives late and deserves more weight — building the piece around that single concrete detail, the pigment-stained hands, might anchor the whole meditation more powerfully than the abstract references to memory and riches that currently dominate.

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Picasso  is a brilliant title

the word Pity! ~ Geezer.

 find your work; click on it, scroll to title you are looking for, in upper left-hand corner of page should be thing that says edit. click there and you should be able to edit.