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Tigger Kaz
Member since April 22, 2023
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No winners in this game
The TV's staying off
As I just want to shout.
Has the world gone crazy?
What's all this hate about?
Social media is no better,
Toxic droning pushed around.
See the persistent aggression,
Like angry rabid hounds.
And I wonder at the point,
Were they waiting in the wings?
For such a proper moment,
To hurl their words that sting.
Or perhaps like robots,
Programmed to spout hate.
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Either way it sucks,
This antithesis of great.
But how to break the cycle?
To resist their willful game.
And who gets to win?
On a merry-go round of blame.
Tigger Kaz’s timeline
- June 2026
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04 ThuReceived a critique
on No winners in this game from @Geezer
"you still should fix these lines: Programmed to spout [their] hate. And who gets to win [it?]" -
04 ThuReceived a critique
on No winners in this game from @Geezer
"the theme, but I think that the meter could use a little touch-up. Try to meet the cooperating line with the same or close number of beats. Read your piece aloud, it will show you where the bumps are! Here are a couple…" -
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02 TueNew follower
@patrickgadoury
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02 TueReceived a critique
on Apathy from @patrickgadoury
"I don’t really have much feedback, and I wish I did, because this hit harder than I expected. It’s a powerful piece that boulders toward its finish. The title lets the reader think they know the theme or direction, but…" - May 2026
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31 SunReceived a critique
on Heart's rescue plan from @devoejack24
"i think a harder look at images; distilling them as it were, could benefit this piece. sometimes the musicality disappears i so me word choices.. still some nice images and enjoyable read." -
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20 WedReceived a critique
on Phoenix Rising from @Geezer
"I can just imagine this in Technicolor! A daylight lightning storm, that gathers on the mountain and a bolt of pure gold light blinds everyone, making everyone think that a survivor is the Lord God Almighty. Great story…" -
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12 TueReceived a critique
on Calmest waters from @Geezer
"I was reminded of one of my favorite philosophers, Bruce Lee. While he was primarily known for his martial arts movies and violent scenes; he did maintain that being like water could quell the storm and bring focus to o…" -
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11 MonReceived a critique
on Mortal Divide from @Geezer
"the intent here, is to cut through the carping that Fear does. A word used in a way that I have only heard from my elders. "Oh, how he carps about [whatever]." Nicely done, ~ Geez" -
10 SunReceived a critique
on Mortal Divide from @Geezer
"that there could be a little better syntax, and maybe in turn, a bit more of equality in meter. Yet spirit glows in amber hope, Slashes fear's carb, cuts the rope. fear's [carb]? I think you mean [garb]. Likewise, I thi…" -
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09 SatCritiqued
"Old Fairy Tales" by @Anna Severchuk
"I really enjoyed this one. The way you flipped between imagined and alternate. Excellent!" -
09 SatCritiqued
"Station of Almost" by @kaiporter920
"I especially loved the final line. "The one that never leaves the heart" Like treasured memories in this capsule of a place." -
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- March 2026
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07 SatNew follower
@ritam
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- February 2026
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28 Sat
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14 SatCritiqued
"The pavement " by @Simon
"The flow is fantastic, and it leaves one with a warm and fuzzy feeling. The last stanza, is oh wow! Our individual journey, but in unity. Loved it!!" - December 2025
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29 MonNew follower
@Anthony Mckeown
- November 2025
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17 MonCritiqued
"Zephyr Memories" by @William Lynn
"I love how movement flows through the poem. From bending grass, going through cracks, whispering to the earth, then drifting away. Wonderful use of metaphors to create this awesome journey. Nicely done!" -
17 MonCritiqued
"Going Home" by @BlueSkies
"I felt this poem deeply. I could hear your inner voice, and it was extremely open, honest, and reflective. A very emotional piece. Well done on your well deserved win!" -
17 MonNew follower
@mark
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- October 2025
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- July 2025
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13 SunPosting milestone
100 poems posted
- June 2025
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21 SatCritiqued
"Cooked up Story..." by @Geezer
"Love the analogy. Although sometimes my words come out like a cook who's creating from a random set of ingredients. It may taste just fine, but there's no way of knowing how to recreate the meal." -
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- May 2025
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- March 2025
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24 MonCritiqued
"The Lambs of Avebury " by @Ruby Lord
"Absolutely loved this. Fantastic witty verse about Britain and it's heritage. Mud and rain, and watch where you tread; for there might be dig poo to avoid as well." -
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- April 2024
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22 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2023
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15 MonHighest posting month
May 2023 — 13 poems
- April 2023
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27 ThuFirst critique offered
on "THE LIVE CLOUD " by @Jackweb
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22 SatFirst publication
On pebbled shore
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22 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
53 year old chronically ill woman. Got into poetry as a way to safely release my emotions.
Location: Coventry, England, GBR
Favorite Poets
Michael Rosen
Rudyard Kipling
Pam Ayres
Benjamin Zephaniah
Recent Work
Stalking Wolf
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Literacy Predicted Days
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Painful awakening
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No more the fool
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