Rhiannon

Member since May 7, 2010

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Tha Sands of Thyme

Posted May 28, 2010 · 13 lines · 2 critiques

Waiting.
Waiting for tomorrow.
Waiting for my roots to take hold.
Waiting for my leaves to sprout humble buds.
Waiting to exhale a breath of fragrant zephyr.
Waiting to be harvested and dried in the sun.
Waiting 'till the planting time comes.
Waiting for my posterity to be scattered to the four winds like seeds.
Waiting to see them grow.
I am still and always shall be,
Waiting.

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July 2010
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Received a critique
on The Modern Obsession with Technology from @southguy
"very good keep upthe good work"
June 2010
17 Thu

Received a critique
on The Modern Obsession with Technology from @michael
"I thought it was interesting and different. I liked it. I am by NO means an expert on this. I like to write things that I am familiar with. I don't know if I would be able to write about something alien to me."
01 Tue

Received a critique
on Insanity from @Arrow
"*strong images, esp. the whirling dime *tight construction *strong vocab My only issue is the first stanza which seems a little mixed-up. The slow drip of a leaky faucet doesn't gel with the running of a rabbit in the s…"
May 2010
28 Fri

Posted a poem
Tha Sands of Thyme
"Waiting."
Open thread 13 lines
26 Wed

Posted a poem
The Modern Obsession with Technology
"(read top to bottom then bottom to top)"
Open thread 12 lines
25 Tue

Posted a poem
Insanity
"Drip, drip, drip,"
Open thread 8 lines
15 Sat

Highest posting month
May 2010 — 7 poems
13 Thu

First critique offered
on "embers of man" by @Bloodstone
13 Thu

First publication
Solstice
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Joined Neopoet
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