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mddy
Member since January 21, 2021
Member for 5 years, 6 months
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Under My Skin
i want to be enveloped
and swallowed whole
bugs crawl under my skin
they’re hungry for you
they nip at my nerves
insatiable for your voice
follow it they cry
they bleed green blood
raging in bitter spite
they don’t want to share
mddy’s timeline
- January 2026
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21 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2024
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29 MonReceived a critique
on Under My Skin from @Geezer
"Although it's been years since I was that passionate; [I'm more comfortable and settled now, having been married for over thirty years.] I still remember how it felt. I liked this and really don't find anything wrong wi…" -
29 Mon
- January 2022
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21 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2021
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21 MonReceived a critique
on Stunted Personality from @Gracy
"Hi mddy, your poem has almost perfect rhymes and spacing. I agree with Geez that some lines need to be smoothed a little. It's highly emotional to read, I hope you're OK and just venting by using poetry. Enjoyed, will r…" -
17 ThuReceived a critique
on Stunted Personality from @Geezer
"I would use the word [ripped] instead of split It is more in keeping with the tearing. I would also use a different word for aimlessly, maybe [crazily]? How about [uninspired faces] instead of expressionless? Wanting to…" -
16 WedReceived a critique
on Stunted Personality from @Geezer
"a list of poems that I want to rewrite, I saw a comment by yourself, and wondered what had become of you. Now, here you are, posting a poem! Funny, how things seem to come in a circle. No worries about being rusty, we w…" -
16 WedReceived a critique
on Stunted Personality from @Triskelion
"this is a lament about a writer's loss of muse and passion. There is a mixture of meter there, but being a technical issue, it's of lower priority to most writers. I hope you discover your muse again. Thomas" -
16 Wed
- February 2021
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27 SatReceived a critique
on The Ghosts You Hid from @scribbler
"A belated welcome to Neopoet. A vert succinct poem which gives the reader a lot to think about and can be interpreted to mean more than one thing" -
26 FriReceived a critique
on The Ghosts You Hid from @Geezer
"that I get it. "He let his body be her host," is that he let her use his body and didn't ever stop wanting her? [That's why it felt like a sad theft.] "Her name still in his throat?" [He sometimes stumbled when he went…" -
24 Wed
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13 SatCritiqued
"Leaves of life" by @Edward nigma
"Such a beautiful set of words! Powerful imagery aswell!" - January 2021
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30 SatReceived a critique
on Tonight and Every Other Night from @Geezer
"the "I don't know your middle name", part! It's something to let us know that you don't know everything, [or a lot] about this fella, but you do know that you have a deep connection with him. I would take a look at a co…" -
29 Fri
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24 SunCritiqued
"Dog Stars" by @Michael Anthony
"I love this poem so much, it is quite painful but in the best way. I am obsessed with the title aswell, this poem is really something!" -
24 SunCritiqued
"Flower Made Much Comparison To Whom?" by @E. L. Hartnest 3rd
"I find myself rereading and rereading this poem as I am so stunned at the beautiful composure and language of it." -
24 Sun
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24 SunCritiqued
"Withering Petals " by @Teddy15
"Your imagery and words take me into your heart, I hope it heals. Beautiful poem!" -
24 Sun
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23 Sat
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22 FriCritiqued
"ANOTHER LEASE OF LIFE" by @lovedly
"Thought provoking piece! I find myself wanting to reread!" -
22 FriCritiqued
"The Pinnacle of My Evolution " by @Teddy15
"This explores life's relentlessness in a very raw way. I find myself relating and reliving while reading! Love to read your stuff!" -
21 ThuFirst critique offered
on "The Secret's In The Wood" (since unpublished) by @Teddy15
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21 ThuFirst publication
Even Before There is Rain
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21 Thu
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21 Thu
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21 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Hello, I'm Maddy (16). I'm not in any way an expirenced or trained poet but, it is an outlet that I use frequently recreationally and enjoy. Kindness>>Literally anything else♡
Location: United States
Favorite Poets
Catie Rosemurgy
Lucie Brock-Broido
Seamus Heaney
Recent Work
Stunted Personality
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The Ghosts You Hid
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Tonight and Every Other Night
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The Confounding Flower
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Even Before There is Rain
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