MASAQIB

Member since June 15, 2012

Member for 13 years, 11 months

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SO CALLED

Posted Oct 25, 2023 · 11 lines · 1 critiques

So called world
Yell not a word
In favour of the oppressed
In hunger and death dressed
So called champions
The big democracies
Do not help the right
But back up the wrong
Help the usurpers to snatch
The land the house
The women that match

MASAQIB’s timeline

October 2023
25 Wed

Posted a poem
SO CALLED
"So called world"
Open thread 11 lines
June 2022
15 Wed

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2022
13 Thu

Received a critique
on A MIRROR from @Race_9togo
"Your title is good. I like your language, although it occassionally becomes a little obscure to me. But that's okay: english is a living language, and it often makes one have to stop and think. In general your cadence i…"
03 Mon

Posted a poem
A MIRROR
"What we receive"
Open thread 24 lines
June 2017
15 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2013
15 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2012
15 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
June 2010
26 Sat

Received a critique
on MOTHER from @Candlewitch
"A clever write! Nice to meet you. Always, Cat"
08 Tue

Posted a poem
MOTHER
"Moments when life frightens"
Open thread 7 lines
March 2010
25 Thu

Received a critique
on Bulletproof conscience from @mark
"I'm not sure what makes this a sensitive matter of a poem. It does seem like a sort of rant to me. That is the experience I felt by way of the last stanza for sure. Done in a rather softer language so far as ranting sha…"
December 2009
15 Tue

Highest posting month
December 2009 — 5 poems
October 2009
31 Sat

First publication
thaw