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louiemary
Member since October 21, 2008
Member for 17 years, 7 months
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Just walk away
When you see trouble
You better run in a double
So just walk away
There is no reason to stay
You are more of a man
Takes that kind of stand
Remember what I say
Just walk away
You don't have to be tough
You can say that's enough
You did the right thing
So that your soul can sing
Just remember to think
You don't have to have that drink
louiemary’s timeline
- October 2023
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20 FriAnniversary
15 years of membership
- October 2018
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20 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- October 2013
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20 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2012
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20 SunReceived a critique
on Just walk away from @temidayo
"yes it sounds better as an overall message of plea,an attempt to dissuade a person from hurting others and ultimately hurting himself or vice versa. You have people like the wonderful judy giving you tips so you cant go…" -
20 SunReceived a critique
on Just walk away from @judyanne
"the more I read this over the more i liked it. just the beginning annoyed me a little 'When you see trouble You better run in a double So just walk away' - the actual saying is ‘run on the double’, but that wasn’t the p…" -
20 SunReceived a critique
on Just walk away from @Candlewitch
"Good title it reflects the poem well. Suggestion: In the last line: You don't have to have that drink how about: You don't have to take that drink Good subject matter! always, Cat" -
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- October 2009
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20 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2009
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16 Sat
- November 2008
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01 SatFirst publication
Where the stallions roam
- October 2008
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29 WedFirst critique offered
on "The Dream" by @Kailashana
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20 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 11 days later.
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