A New Hope

Looking for the future

Learning to cope

To be reassure

Going down on the road

A place to roam

Emotions we can off load

A place like home

Is a place we can make a quick stop

Without making a flop

We see stars

From here and afar

— louiemary, Feb 21, 2009

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yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Louiemary

This just needs a tweek and maybe a little longer would improve it a lot, welcome back to Neopoet, we are now waiting for more work from you on he site lol, Hope to see more of your poems,Yours Ian.T

louiemary

17 years 2 months ago

Thank you for kyour reply and I will consider it.

Thanks for your honest opinion of this and I will probably rework this poem and see what comes up. Thanks for your opinion again.

Rett