A.J. Sanders

A.J. Sanders’s timeline

1. August 2026
2. 02 Sun
   Critiqued

   "Evening Shadows" by @William Lynn

   "Okay. None the less, it was great read. I enjoyed it."
3. 02 Sun
   Critiqued

   "Evening Shadows" by @William Lynn

   "I enjoyed reading your poem immensely. A true pleasure. The imagery of the shadows folding the light in gentle hands was a masterful play on words to create such a gentle overtake of light by shadows,,,Love it! The rhym…"
4. July 2026
5. 31 Fri
   Critiqued

   "New York City in a Day" by @Yumpy

   "The pleasure was truly mine. I look forward to reading your future works."
6. 30 Thu
   Critiqued

   "New York City in a Day" by @Yumpy

   "Excellent free-verse. Great flow. The imagery, the sights. Loved it! I could smell the bagel carts and vibe with the music. My only hitches were the sudden drop of "we" in stanza 4 where "We slip beneath...". And the do…"
7. 27 Mon
   Critiqued

   "Heart Drumming Against My Ribs" by @K-T

   "The layout and flow is amazing. The free-verse style played beautifully. At first I was wondering whether It would be "off" due to the "random" stanza lengths, but I was quick to realize there was nothing random about t…"
8. 26 Sun
   Critiqued

   "Kira ~ who rescued who?" by @Tink

   "Anytime Tink! I'm sorry for your loss. My condolences. To immortalize your companions story. What a special, deeply heartfelt memorial. I have fallowed your poem and am excited to see what's to come. Places I stumbled…"
9. 26 Sun
   Critiqued

   "Kira ~ who rescued who?" by @Tink

   "The AABB rhyme scheme was very well executed. I did find myself stumble a bit with flow, but the pacing within the plot was pleasurable. The message as I seen it was distress and abuse alleviated by an outside compassio…"
10. 26 Sun
    First critique offered

    on "Kira ~ who rescued who?" by @Tink

11. 24 Fri
    New follower

    @Tink

12. 23 Thu
    Joined Neopoet

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