zuella

Member since November 1, 2023

Member for 2 years, 7 months

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28 Poems

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Posted Mar 25, 2026 · 22 lines · 1 critiques

Im getting tired of this world
I wish to lay at rest
Body at peace
And my hair all twirled
Into the love
I got to bare
Before these governments
Have taken, unfair
To kill more people
And make more coin
Another billionaire
To laugh and destroy
Innocent civilians
Your every day Joe

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How will you spend billionaire ?
Spend your dough ?
If everyone
Is dead

Fuck the government
Fuck trump
Freedom of speech
Freedom of uproar

zuella’s timeline

March 2026
27 Fri

Received a critique
on [ redacted file ] from @Lavender
"Hello, zuella, I was reading about the 1965 March from Selma, Alabama to Montgomery, the state capitol . At one point, there were 25,000 (25,000!) people on the final leg to Montgomery. Extremely brave men and women who…"
25 Wed

Posted a poem
[ redacted file ]
"Im getting tired of this world"
Open thread 22 lines
February 2026
03 Tue

Received a critique
on Lie detective from @Leslie
"Wow, what a poem! If I could hold onto someone like this, I'd give my whole soul just to coexist. This may sound shallow, but I feel that we all need a lover, upon which we can rely. An interesting way to convey your fe…"
January 2026
18 Sun

Posted a poem
Lie detective
"Hold me at gunpoint"
Open thread 22 lines
September 2025
29 Mon

Received a critique
on 2026 oasis calendar from @Lavender
"Hello, zuella, Gotta ask, did you meet at an Oasis concert, or share a love for the band? This is simple and sweet. I like the word "devout" as it led me deeper into the narrator's vulnerable feelings. Thank you! L"
24 Wed

Posted a poem
2026 oasis calendar
"I put you in my calendar,"
Open thread 9 lines
August 2025
31 Sun

Posted a poem
Loving for the sake of everyone but yourself, an altruistic act
"“I love that I get to love someone like you, regardless of whether or not that love is returned or felt to the same extent, the very ability that I have to love you as I do is enough to get me up on bad days, and it’s nearly enough for me to thank a god I don’t believe in”"
Open thread 1 lines
29 Fri

Received a critique
on some poet once wrote from @Lavender
"Hello, zuella, Love it all, especially those final two lines. Thank you! L"
28 Thu

Received a critique
on some poet once wrote from @Ray Miller
"Love the closing lines. Don't think you need "close" in line 5, goes without saying really."
27 Wed

Posted a poem
some poet once wrote
"Ugly laughter,"
Open thread 15 lines
07 Thu

Received a critique
on I love you, my moon from @Lavender
"Hello, zuella, I agree with Rula - truly gorgeous. Your last few words add a touch of intimacy and mystery. Lovely, lovely, Thank you, L"
06 Wed

Critiqued
"Untitled" by @Joe
"This is.. incredibly deep. It is beyond my understanding, this is an insane experience, a horrible horrible experience. One you shouldn’t of had to endure, one no one should ever have to endure. I am so, so, so sorry Jo…"
06 Wed

Received a critique
on I love you, my moon from @Rula
"Yet shines with love Truely gorgeous. If I had to change any thing , I'd change the title. I feel it a bit trite/cliched for such a distinguished piece, and yet it's your poem and your choice Thank you for sharing!"
06 Wed

New follower
@Joe
06 Wed

Posted a poem
I love you, my moon
"For love seeps,"
Open thread 6 lines
July 2025
31 Thu

New follower
@Candlewitch
31 Thu

Received a critique
on Not so star crossed, but still lovers from @Candlewitch
"this s the second "love poem" I have read today, and it is excellent! I loved these lines: The daughter of anger, the son of anguish the pain they each suffer I am looking forward to reading your next installment of thi…"
31 Thu

Posted a poem
Not so star crossed, but still lovers
"Look at me"
Open thread 92 lines
June 2025
12 Thu

New follower
@zuella
12 Thu

Posted a poem
Unrequited love for life
"My body know’s it"
Open thread 21 lines
April 2025
29 Tue

Posted a poem
Generational opinions
"They say, “you are what you eat”, but they don’t mention how we’ve all been spoon fed by our parents, their parents to them and so forth."
Open thread 1 lines
March 2025
07 Fri

Critiqued
"The Day The Poetry Died" by @Lavender
"This was truly beautiful. I haven't spent much time on neopoet as of the last six months and this was one of the first poems ive read since being back and commenting under peoples poems and this is just a spectacular st…"
07 Fri

Critiqued
"The Day The Poetry Died" by @Lavender
"This was truly beautiful. I haven't spent much time on neopoet as of the last six months and this was one of the first poems ive read since being back and commenting under peoples poems and this is just a spectacular st…"
02 Sun

Posted a poem
the to and fro crescent
"At the end of the day"
Open thread 8 lines
February 2025
05 Wed

Posted a poem
Garrotte
"I should have known that times were tough when I turned against my poetry"
Open thread 9 lines
November 2024
01 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2024
20 Thu

Posted a poem
Free (the) world
"If everyone always did what they were told, nothing would ever happen."
Open thread 1 lines
May 2024
07 Tue

Critiqued
"My Military Hero" by @Clentin
"I love its simplicity, I love how it's short to evoke the emotions quickly. You get straight to the point and it's really beautiful. It's relatable and kind, thank you for posting this."
01 Wed

Critiqued
"Imagine " by @Mini
"This is something that has seriously connected with me, i understand this on a level i wish i didnt have to, i wish you didnt have to feel these things either. Its something rather constricting to love unrequitedly, esp…"
April 2024
29 Mon

Critiqued
"My Worlds" by @MermaidMaster
"This was really beautiful, it feels like it should be in a romance movie that ends tragically. This whole poem has this surface vibe of a lovey dovey relationship, but a deep, undisclosed vibe of tragedy, of some unknow…"
29 Mon

Critiqued
"Inside" by @EmanuelSfatcu
"Thank you so much! have a great day, I hope to see much more from you soon"
28 Sun

Critiqued
"Inside" by @EmanuelSfatcu
"Hi Emmanuel! I see this is your first poem on the site, but obviously you’re a poet in your own time, you should definitely post more here. This was somethign that intended to smack me in the face and watch me fall down…"
18 Thu

New follower
@Leslie
March 2024
18 Mon

First critique offered
on "To Janice With Love..." by @Geezer
November 2023
01 Wed

First publication
an interrogative word
01 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.