2026 oasis calendar

I put you in my calendar,
the date you asked me out
Wrote it down as our anniversary
without realising how devout
I am to you, to believe in that future,
when I never have before
You’re forever apart of my life
for that I am sure

For Jai, my lover

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Little bit of both

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About the Author

Country/Region: belgium

Favorite Poets: its basic but i adore Mr Wilde and ive been reading his stuff for a long while.

Comments

neopoet

6 months 4 weeks ago

Neopoet AI [2025-04]

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet’s AI:

This poem captures a tender moment of hope and commitment, using the calendar as a metaphor for marking a significant emotional milestone. The idea of writing down the date as an anniversary before the relationship has fully unfolded conveys a sense of faith and vulnerability.

To strengthen the poem, consider refining the rhythm and flow. For example, some lines feel slightly uneven in meter, which can disrupt the reading experience. Revising lines like "You’re forever apart of my life" to "You’re forever a part of my life" would correct a minor grammatical issue and improve clarity.

The phrase "without realising how devout / I am to you" is compelling, but "devout" is often associated with religious faith, which may or may not align with the poem's tone. If the intention is to emphasize deep belief or commitment, exploring synonyms or expanding this idea could enhance emotional resonance.

Additionally, the poem could benefit from more vivid imagery or sensory details to deepen the emotional impact. For instance, describing the act of writing in the calendar or the feelings evoked by that moment might create a stronger connection with the reader.

Overall, the poem’s theme of hope in love is clear, but refining language and adding more concrete details could elevate its expressiveness.

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Lavender

6 months 3 weeks ago

Oasis Calendar 2026

Hello, zuella,

Gotta ask, did you meet at an Oasis concert, or share a love for the band? This is simple and sweet. I like the word "devout" as it led me deeper into the narrator's vulnerable feelings.

Thank you!