zjeakin

Member since February 10, 2012

Member for 14 years, 3 months

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Alone

Posted Jul 13, 2019 · 5 lines · 1 critiques

A man sits alone on the beach
A solitary tear washes down his cheek
The party rages and the lights strobe
But in his soul he is alone

Zachary J Eakin - 7 - 13 - 19

zjeakin’s timeline

February 2022
10 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
September 2020
21 Mon

Received a critique
on Alone from @Pataphysique.C
"This is imagistic, possessing a compact ferocity. I wonder if altering the third line, making it more sparse, might make it a more intense piece. Like eliminating the first "The" and returning to your original scheme wi…"
July 2019
13 Sat

Posted a poem
Alone
"A man sits alone on the beach"
Open thread 5 lines
February 2017
10 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
September 2015
11 Fri

Received a critique
on Battle from @wesley snow
"I guess you haven't been around for a while as I have not seen your work before. I'm not the best at critiquing free verse, so I won't try. The subject matter is disturbing, but that's intended. I agree with everyone el…"
11 Fri

Received a critique
on Battle from @Geezer
"with Ian. Replacing words and taking the time to keep the rhythm, can make a good poem great. Good work to start, keep striving to make your work better. That is what this site is all about. ~ Geezer"
10 Thu

Posted a poem
Battle
"I grow cold and hard,"
Open thread 25 lines
August 2015
08 Sat

Posted a poem
Demons
"Heart has hardened"
Open thread 16 lines
February 2013
10 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2012
24 Thu

First critique offered
on "LATE NIGHT LULLABY" by @scribbler
February 2012
10 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
April 2010
15 Thu

Highest posting month
April 2010 — 8 poems
08 Thu

First publication
Three Types of People