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Nov 01, 2020
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Where will lovers meet
In silence
loneliness
mundanes
grief
joy
day
night
in brightness
darkness
but only meet
if at all
in drooping eyes
as hearts smile...
— lovedly, Nov 01, 2020
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Today is lovers day as is any day
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Dystopia
3 years 11 months ago
Hi! This poem is such a gem,
Hi! This poem is such a gem, it appears at first glance as a bunch of words but when you read it the meaning is so clear! I would just take a look at the last line and make it plural as you are discussing two lovers. This is a piece is truly short and sweet!
lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
See
never ever delete a composed poem
angels still exist and come to teach
out of the vast wilderness I beseech
Thanks for your kind emergence
Dystopia
3 years 11 months ago
Nice work on the revision! It
Nice work on the revision! It is a small change but does make a difference! Also… your comments in poetry form are also just as delightful (makes me think)!
lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
thank you
kindness be thy virtue kid
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