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Dystopia
Member since July 13, 2022
Member for 3 years, 10 months
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The In-Between
Concealed in the darkness of time,
Gone are the wondrous years of my prime,
My thread never sliced by the fates,
Untouched by death’s unforgiving gates,
I do not live nor am I dead,
To Cronos I forever pled,
Becoming free from residing in between,
Let me roam to where I am once again seen,
Fearsome I am certainly not,
A vow of obedience I have brought,
Not agreeing to free my deserving self,
You will soon feel the wrath of my full health,
I will enjoy returning to where I was once loved,
And never again into this insanity will I be shoved,
I will bring righteousness to this world again,
Even if I have to meet the end of all ends.
Dystopia’s timeline
- February 2024
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27 TueReceived a critique
on The In-Between from @Candlewitch
"It is very nice to meet you! Your poem put me in mind of Piers Anthony's Incarnations Of Immortality series, which I really enjoyed! my favorite lines are: My thread never sliced by the fates, Untouched by death’s unfor…" -
27 Tue
- July 2023
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13 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2023
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23 MonReceived a critique
on The Reflection from @Candlewitch
"the next great adventure... *hugs, Cat *ever, eddy" -
07 Sat
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05 Thu
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05 ThuCritiqued
"Warmer side of Life " by @lovedly
"This poem is short, sweet and wonderful! Thanks for a happy “warm” read on a cold day!" -
04 WedReceived a critique
on Shattered from @Candlewitch
"a unique poem that freely flows in words and meaning! I like it very much! *hugs, Cat" -
03 TueReceived a critique
on Shattered from @Rosewood Apothecary
"We do this for survival. Survival mode is exhausting and eventually the walls must be broken down. This is painful as it requires a person to take a really hard honest look at themselves. It’s time to live now not merel…" -
02 Mon
- December 2022
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05 Mon
- November 2022
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23 WedReceived a critique
on Mellifluous Melodies from @Geezer
"this workshop didn't go the way it was planned. I had a good time with it, but I guess it was too complicated for some of the participants. Anyway, good job Mark, thanks for the opportunity to try something new! ~ Geez…" -
22 TueReceived a critique
on Mellifluous Melodies from @Rula
"An awesome writing here. It has a very potential sonnet feeling to it. Giving some attention to the syllable's count in each line you can turn it to a real mellifluous melody. I liked the pleasing sound the M&M title th…" -
22 Tue
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21 Mon
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21 MonCritiqued
"ACCEPT REALITY IN POETRY" by @lovedly
"Hi Lovedly, I truly enjoyed this as it made me really sit and think about the impact of reading other poetry on a poet’s own writing. It really is something that we all need to reflect on once in a while. Nice work! - D…" -
19 SatContest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week Contest November 13th to November 19th 2022
with "Ephemeral Love".
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19 SatFirst contest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week Contest November 13th to November 19th 2022
with the poem "Ephemeral Love".
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17 Thu
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08 TueCritiqued
"Poem to My Childhood Self" by @markold
"You immersed us in a simpler time, where our biggest problems were usually our siblings. I appreciate the depth this poem offers and the use of miraculous ties it in nicely!" -
08 TueCritiqued
"To Be Loved Endlessly" by @RoseBlack
"Such a deep connection and utter devotion! Thanks for bringing us back to something so rare today! The imagery is breathtaking!" -
07 Mon
- October 2022
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24 MonNew follower
@Geezer
- August 2022
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07 SunCritiqued
"HEAL OUR LAND" by @Oluwatobi
"Hi there! This poem is a really deep and thought-provoking work. I really liked your use of real-life relevant examples in your poem, as well as the repetition of certain words for emphasis. One suggestion.. sometimes y…" -
07 SunCritiqued
"Self Resurrection " by @QueenPhoenix
"Hi QueenPheonix. This is a stellar example of how a poem can really bring awareness to issues like these that exist in society. The emotion in this poem is expertly conveyed, leaving the reader with a new understanding…" -
05 FriFirst critique offered
on "NOW COME CLOSER LOVEDLY RETURNS " by @lovedly
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05 Fri
- July 2022
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19 Tue
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13 WedFirst publication
Frozen Solid
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13 Wed
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13 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I want to be able to share my poems with others and improve my poetic skills!
Location: Canada
Recent Work
The In-Between
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Shattered
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Mellifluous Melodies
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Ephemeral Love
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Miraculous Marvels
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The Reflection
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City Ruins
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Frozen Solid
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Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| Ephemeral Love | Neopoem Of The Week Contest November 13th to November 19th 2022 | – |
Workshops
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| Neopoet Collaborative Workshop Poem #8 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-10-02 | Concluded |
| Neopoet Collaborative Workshop Poem # 7 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-09-22 | Concluded |
| Neopoet Collaborative Workshop Poem # 6 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-09-13 | Concluded |
| Neopoet Collaborative Poem #5 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-09-06 | Concluded |
| Neopoet Collaborative Poem #4 Workshop | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-08-28 | Concluded |
| Collaborative Poetry Workshop #3 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-08-21 | Concluded |
| Collaborative Poem Workshop #2 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-08-11 | Concluded |
| Collaborative Poem Workshop | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-08-08 | Concluded |