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Jan 04, 2013
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Worries from past
sabotaging present
old memories
haunting tapestries
woven into now
wish they'd take a bow
and exit stage door
don't want them anymore
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 10 months ago
Well done back on track
Interesting that when temporarily depressed the quality of your work fell
sueb
12 years 10 months ago
thanks a mil x
thanks a mil x
Seren
12 years 10 months ago
I like this one Sue I can't
I like this one Sue I can't find anything to crit
Well done
Jc ~
sueb
12 years 10 months ago
thanks a mil so glad u
thanks a mil so glad u enjoyed this little one all the best cheers sueb x