sueb

Member since November 7, 2012

Member for 13 years, 6 months

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Hibernation

Posted May 15, 2013 · 13 lines · 4 critiques

I’m present
but absent
here
but gone away
body visible
spirit invisible
people talking
not listening
lost
private battle
need
to heal
hibernate

sueb’s timeline

November 2022
07 Mon

Anniversary
10 years of membership
November 2017
07 Tue

Anniversary
5 years of membership
November 2013
07 Thu

Anniversary
One year of membership
July 2013
16 Tue

Received a critique
on Hibernation from @Ian.T
"I hope things are going better for you now and at some time you can join us again as you are missed. The sun is shinning out there so let the sun of thoughts shine on your Spirit, Yours as always Ian.T"
May 2013
18 Sat

Received a critique
on Hibernation from @Ian.T
"To hibernate is to give in, a good write.. Look at those Aussies they go on a walkabout to find themselves.. We are beautiful creatures, many try to push us down and make us feel as if we are inadequate, it is the tests…"
15 Wed

Posted a poem
Hibernation
"I’m present"
Open thread 13 lines
March 2013
25 Mon

Received a critique
on St. Patricks' Day (2 sides to every story) from @Ian.T
"I liked the two sides to St Patrick's day and I could give you another one that hits me quite hard each year as memories flood my normally stable ways( No Laughing ).. I have my own St Patrick's day poem I have taken it…"
20 Wed

Posted a poem
Happily Silent
"I would like to be content with my own company"
Open thread 20 lines
17 Sun

Posted a poem
St. Patricks' Day (2 sides to every story)
"The Bad"
Open thread 29 lines
December 2012
15 Sat

Highest posting month
December 2012 — 23 poems
November 2012
28 Wed

Most-discussed work
Senryu - Lotto

16 critiques to date.
09 Fri

First critique offered
on "someday he will come" by @judyanne
07 Wed

First publication
His Mystery
07 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.