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Edward nigma
Edward nigma
Nov 29, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A star with a scar

A star with
a scar
lead out of
the light.
Longs for
love yet
nurtures
the night .

— Edward nigma, Nov 29, 2021

About This Poem

Last Few Words: My inspiration was sunset boulevard I’m sorry for my absence but it’s hard to think recently I’ve had two bran surgeries they had to put a bur hole up which is you drill a hole in the skull and they discovered my shunt was over draining and then I had brain surgery. It’s hard to write because it’s hard for me to think.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde , William Wordsworth

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Critiques

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 6 months ago

Nice to see...

you back and writing. I agree, short sentences, keeping the thoughts focused, will help you come back. Nice job so far. ~ Geez.
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LM

large marge

4 years 6 months ago

Really nice!

I love a well done concise poem. This one reminds me of my favorite Joni Mitchell song