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May 25, 2026
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Seduction ever rife with explicitly sexual...
erotica written alludes and silently
ushers consummation albeit
between yours truly and a female
through words on a computer screen
constituting my chosen métier to write
against the parochial and orthodox
conventions dictating verboten
freedom of expression
to defy on purpose
aural, carnal, effectual,
gonadal, integral, kernel, moral...
appetite for consumption
though when couched
thru the electronic medium
must employ cunning, gunning,
punning, stunning evocative powers
while sunning and employ tricks (and treats)
of the trade - old as man/woman hood
to accomplish (like
any other type of artisan)
ipso de facto ploy to lure the imagination
of course much easier reading
non-verbal body language,
but I feel impartial to the written word
imbuing me with confidence
and while reveling
what must be the net result
as the mind trumped up
when donned in poetic license
to apply painstaking efforts
that allow, enable and provide
Noah Webster incarnate,
where wily word wizard
can take time to drum up
desirable protracted, pheromonal
and hormonal the buck stops here
barenaked ladies ineluctably aroused
percolate into the subconscious mind
of unknown gender whose eyes
scan thee some might say execrable
intimation, nevertheless
implying a futile struggle
where moral majority cannot castigate
nor castrate the author of auto-erotica,
hence tsunami powerless
against fate or natural forces
pitting wanton lust "Butt up,"
where church fathers and mothers
defenseless simply by a choice
to be inexplicit when gently
driving home a point
where truth be told
mind boggling words mine mein
nothing in a court of law
procreative pathetic poetry
of mine without a shadow of a doubt
(just go ask Phil the groundhog)
double entendre meaning
when masterly baited
mustered to induce listener/reader
to ketchup before appearing bashful
as subliminal with courtesy videlicet
the main interpretation
usually straightforward and innocent,
while the second intentionally
nudges and hints prurient
risqué, suggestive, or socially awkward
when word wizard
divulges trademark
no-nonsense foo fighting
beastie boy qua auto suggestion
Noah Webster incarnate
doth like to muster
and massage words
of English language
thine only figurative
known to spellbind
to mean how the
building blocks when applied just so
when arranged in alpha
bed dick cull order
where the building blocks
invested with fingers
all to familiar
with English language
and finagle themselves familiarly
skittering across the qwerty keyboard
with plain as déjà vu deliberation
arranged just shy of risqué
and when effectively massaged
within parameters being unilingual
to evoke with purposeful intent
nsync just an adequate subtle hint
while these slithering slinky fingers
accommodating and accompanying
doth thrust out the mouth
universal primal sounds,
where actual words superfluous
no matter mother tongue
unilingual, bilingual trilingual...
of yours truly, the one and only me
while lips pucker and smack
with just a figurative taste
of sadomasochism to affect seduction
no matter I sit with a comfortably tush
yet hope springs eternal
that within the mind of the reader,
he/she, him/her, his/hers...
oral courtesy complements chosen métier
of writing - actually keying words
with sly and the family stone fashion
teasing out sought after objective,
and I sure hope you enjoyed
reading highly nutritious,
protein-rich organ meat
commonly used across the globe
in comfort foods, soups, and stewed tripe.
— Jane A. Rug, May 25, 2026
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Critiques
neopoet
1 week 1 day ago
Neopoet AI [2025-04]
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet’s AI:
This poem ambitiously explores the theme of erotic writing and the challenges of conveying sensuality through the written word, particularly in a digital medium. The speaker positions themselves as a "Noah Webster incarnate," a master wordsmith who crafts subtle, layered meanings that tease and seduce without explicitness. This meta-poetic reflection on language and desire is a compelling foundation.
Strengths: - The poem’s vocabulary is rich and varied, with inventive wordplay ("cunning, gunning, punning, stunning," "bed dick cull order") that enlivens the text and underscores the speaker’s linguistic dexterity. - The interplay between explicit and implicit, the tension between societal taboos and personal expression, is thoughtfully developed. - The poem’s structure, with its short, enjambed lines and irregular stanza breaks, mirrors the fragmented, teasing nature of erotic communication through text.
Areas for improvement: 1. **Clarity and Focus:** The poem’s dense allusiveness and frequent shifts in tone and register can make it difficult to follow. For example, some phrases ("auto-erotica," "foo fighting beastie boy qua auto suggestion") feel cryptic or overly idiosyncratic. Consider refining or contextualizing these references to enhance accessibility without sacrificing complexity.
2. **Punctuation and Line Breaks:** The poem relies heavily on enjambment but often lacks punctuation to guide the reader through its syntax. Strategic use of commas, periods, or dashes could help clarify meaning and improve the poem’s rhythm.
3. **Consistency of Voice:** The poem oscillates between conversational, scholarly, and playful tones. While this can be effective, smoothing transitions between these voices may strengthen the overall coherence.
4. **Imagery and Sensory Detail:** Although the poem is rich in linguistic play, it could benefit from more vivid sensory imagery to evoke the physicality of seduction and the emotional resonance of erotic writing. This would ground the abstract wordplay in concrete experience.
5. **Ending:** The closing lines introduce the metaphor of "highly nutritious, protein-rich organ meat," which is intriguing but somewhat abrupt. Expanding or connecting this image more clearly to the poem’s central themes could provide a more satisfying conclusion.
Overall, the poem demonstrates a sophisticated engagement with language as both a tool and a subject of erotic expression. With some tightening and enhanced clarity, it can more powerfully convey the nuanced dance between words and desire.
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devoejack24
4 days 6 hours ago
I will read this poem again…
I will read this poem again and probably a few more times. First impression is that it is random dictionary words to look intelligent. If it is about erotic writing it is the least erotic thing i have read. Perhaps it is too intellectual for me, i am not a very exposed reader of poetry. I really have trouble following the piece, the line breaks and the musicality break down for me. It is challenging no doubt so i will come back and read again
jack
devoejack24
4 days 6 hours ago
I will read this poem again…
I will read this poem again and probably a few more times. First impression is that it is random dictionary words to look intelligent. If it is about erotic writing it is the least erotic thing i have read. Perhaps it is too intellectual for me, i am not a very exposed reader of poetry. I really have trouble following the piece, the line breaks and the musicality break down for me. It is challenging no doubt so i will come back and read again
jack