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May 03, 2016
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OH!
THE WORLD WON'T END
if I post no poems
do read the older ones
till then amen
slightly unfit
will be better soon
eyes and ears
lost to the moon
— lovedly, May 03, 2016
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Rula
10 years 1 month ago
smiles
.
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
if my weakness can
make the Head smile
then all other heads
should turn around
and smile
Rula
Rula
10 years 1 month ago
sorry!
don't mean to be mean. May be I didn't get your last lines. Do you mean you don't feel well, eyes and ears lost to the moon?
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
yes
I don't weep in public
but since you ask
well from tomorrow they will play merry hell
hockey and football with in my mouth
how much will remain of me
heaven knows
later this month they want to pull out my eye
as i had donated my eyes
but i did not confirm
after i am no more
so I may lose one
never mind
someone will also see
with mine.
Life is like a flowing River
one comes across crocodiles
at times
fish take a u turn
at times
Rula
10 years 1 month ago
I am really feel sorry
to hear the news.
Seems so many bad news all around for me to bear.
Sorry again. Take care.
Geremia
10 years 1 month ago
I will be looking for your
I will be looking for your return, dear friend.
joe for joe
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
I shall not be gone for long
Kindly Joe
do read EPITOME
just posted
thanks
you are that pillar of strength
most may envy
my poetic friend!
mand
10 years 1 month ago
Hi Loved
Hope all goes well!
Love Mand xxx
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
thankx for the good wishes
so far the start was well