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Apr 15, 2016
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May you live long O poet!
You take me to those heights
where I could never
dream to ever fly
but for you....
you have been
my master
all know
and
a sincerest one
at that also
many read me
only b'coz you say so
hope you stay longer
ere you go
May the winds of change
bring about a change
and
let you forever
in our hearts remain
this world is a vast domain
we all know
no one for all times does remain
but we have to be sane
and
accept of what does remain
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
10 years ago
good message for all to read.
good message for all to read. Clear and concise poetry
joe.
lovedly
10 years ago
thank you joe
do you know
another guy
god knows from where
has come to wring me
like a wet towel
one does on a beach
without any thing on
upon