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Geremia
Geremia
May 04, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

MASK

MASK
Where are the movers and shakers
the promises of better things
Where are the friends
where did the family ties go
who are these faces new
these bullies and these takers
who are these cannibals
feasting on my soul.

— Geremia, May 04, 2013

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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Rula

Rula

13 years 1 month ago

joe

So many questions but unfortunatelly no answes. A good capture of this unmarciful life.

Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

13 years 1 month ago

a very well worded poem

Apart from what this is saying,
well not entirely,
it is a very well worded poem in my opinion;
as I see it was for Rula too.

Good show Joe, love Anni