M0RNING WAYS

MORNING WAYS

When shadows gray
and blue melancholy
cross my brow
as morning strikes
and I awake
I wonder how
many ways
I can break
this evil spell

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Comments

Ian.T

13 years ago

Joe

A piece of awe,.
That you wake is a blessing, it means that you still have much to do, just ask what the tasks are, but maybe you already know the things you have to do..
A Good write glad that you awoke to a new day, Yours Ian.T

Bonitaj

13 years ago

Hello Geremia!

another 'soulful' write from you. You always capture the mood so well!
Regards

Geremia

13 years ago

Thanks for that ,my friend.

joe

loved

13 years ago

yeah and tomorrow,,when we are no more

yesterday
i composed a wonderful poetry
on tomorrow will come
but sad to say
you may or may not stay etc

i forgot to save it
they rushed me mad
i'd forgotten the title even
now you remind me
i shall recompose
twill come back to me
thanks Gerie

Geremia

13 years ago

:)

loved

13 years ago

just composed

and posted
do see

weirdelf

13 years ago

Elegant, succinct and meaningful

A perfect piece of verse, not a word of excess or out of place. In just nine lines and twenty six words you present feeling with imagery, dilemma and hope. Quite extraordinary.

Geremia

13 years ago

I am pleased and encouraged.

I am pleased and encouraged. Thank you, Jess.