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Apr 21, 2016
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A LUZ --Portuguese -English
A LUZ
A luz que brilha dentro
é como uma chama de vela
tremulando ao vento,
uma vacilação da alma
em antecipação assustadora
abatido pelo Tempo
enfraquecido até morrer...
THE LIGHT
the light that shines within
is like a candle flame that
flickers in the wind
a soul wavering
in frightful anticipation
weathered by Time
and dying…
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
10 years ago
What can I say Joe
This is poetry! True poetry!Simple yet reflects true raw feelings
Who writes alike shall never die
Geremia
10 years ago
What a great compliment, Rula
What a great compliment, Rula
joe
lovedly
10 years ago
and yes this is also
THE BIRD FLIES
WHERE IS HOME!
Geremia
10 years ago
muito obrigado,,amigo meu.
muito obrigado,,amigo meu.
Geezer
10 years ago
I have images...
of a candle popping and sputtering against the wind and the light that's shed showing the true human spirit. ~ Gee.
Geremia
10 years ago
yes, that is what the light
yes, that is what the light is...
joe