Gran's Diet

Sausages and chips,
sauces and dips,
thoughts of them
has me licking my lips
forgetting the hips

So I'm going to back away
as I remember
what my granny used to say
makes me smile
as I recall her sniggers
"little pickers, bigger knickers"

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ireland, IRL

Comments

Frenchf

12 years 10 months ago

cute

but who has body image issues?

sueb

12 years 10 months ago

thanks jess think we all have

thanks jess think we all have in one form or another

Ian.T

12 years 9 months ago

Have read several of your poems in fact all of them, that I haven't commented much is that I was waiting for a longish serious piece from you, as I sit here listening to Danny Boy and the lyrics are telling me a story would just love to here such a story from your pen, Yours Ian.T

sueb

12 years 9 months ago

Hi Ian I'm as deep as a

Hi Ian I'm as deep as a puddle but I will try a more serious one but I've been told their soppy maybe I'm better with the humor have a gr8 day all the best Sueb x