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Dec 11, 2012
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Feeling Frisky
I'm feeling frisky
Can we be a bit risky?
find some little alcove
and share our love
I've never been so brave
but you, right now, I crave
Is that a sound of condemnation?
No, cos here you are at my work station
You say "I need you to do some filing"
I outwardly moan but can't stop smiling
never has it felt so right
can't wait for more afternoon delight
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Race_9togo
12 years 10 months ago
Hi Sue
LOL This good, but I think lines 3 & 4 need a re-write. "alcove" is real hard to rhyme!
Nice one.
sueb
12 years 10 months ago
Hi Jim
Hi Jim
thanks for enjoying this little one but keeping in line with this poem instead of alcove I immediately thought of nook and won't tell u what I rhymed with that lol have a gr8 day x
Race_9togo
12 years 10 months ago
LOL
LOL!!!
loved
12 years 10 months ago
sad not many frisked ,,,but beautiful imagination
as well as invitation
well done
hope he came
sueb
12 years 10 months ago
thanks loved he came lol x
thanks loved he came lol x
loved
12 years 10 months ago
CONGRATS Ma'am
i knew he must have
this was just a confirmation