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Dec 29, 2014
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DUST TO DUST
DUST TO DUST
Where do I go from here,
I am not ashes or dust,
I am electricity electric blue
and I will continue
bursting through the stars
free from my mind
no longer bound by time.
Or am I Hope's fool.
I think and wonder
I suffer the pains of the flesh
and the fears of immortality
and I am crucified,
About This Poem
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Comments
Ian.T
10 years 10 months ago
Joe
It will be great to see that electric blue streaking across infinity finding all like Souls and blending with those you love, see you later,
Yours Ian..
Lenny of Cohen
10 years 10 months ago
Nicely written
and something I've been exploring intimately for the last few years. At 12 I had an NDE and had a sneak at what is to come, and I can honestly say going Home is a Beautiful experience! I struggled for months to adjust back to normal life! I eventually did, but when I shared my experience I ridiculed. I have researched the subject of Near Death Experiences and would recommend PMH Atwater - who you can see on You Tube.
There is no death, but there is a Beautiful transition. A return Home. Sadly some souls are trapped by their thoughts, and it may take a while for them to realize what has happened. It saddens me that in the 21st century the transition process is not understood fully. I am fortunate in that I am prepared for my return Home, and I do share what I experienced to help others know what awaits.
Once again, well written.
Geremia
10 years 10 months ago
I thank you for that. It is
I thank you for that. It is difficult to deal with illness and fear when you are alone. There are worse things than death, I always hoped to see my family again, Yes, in the 21st century the transition can be hard.
joe
Lenny of Cohen
10 years 9 months ago
Earthly Lessons can be difficult.
As they come in a myriad of guises. But from my own Near Death Experience I can assure you Joe that you are in for a treat! Also I have researched the subject of NDE's and that has also reassured me(not that I needed any reassurance!), and yesterday I came across this excellent short video about transition, hope you enjoy it Joe. Physical pain is another examination and I know what extreme pain is, and its something which I manage with heavy duty pain killers! I am of the opinion that if we can control the mind to some degree we may manage the pain better, this is something I will be practicing myself as I venture further into my exploration of consciousness.
The video:
What happens after we die? - NASA physicist Tom Campbell on The Z Cases
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwxsnKcwei4
Namaste,
Lenny
Geremia
10 years 9 months ago
Thank you, Lenny. I needed
Thank you, Lenny. I needed this today!
joe