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Jan 02, 2013
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Can't
I'm not able, I won't, I can't
this is the weak person's chant
makes me want to rant
try to stay calm but I can't
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
12 years 10 months ago
oh go and listen to some Tony Robbins tapes or something
this poem is almost as lame as my last one.
sueb
12 years 10 months ago
thanks Jess who's Tony
thanks Jess who's Tony Robbins
weirdelf
12 years 10 months ago
He is one of those "ispirational, motivational" spealers
I despised the concept for a long time but his ideas are pretty cool
Anthony Robbins downloadable.
Frenchf
12 years 10 months ago
I am not registered to critique
But I agree with Jess.this is well below your normal level of skill xx
sueb
12 years 10 months ago
no problem french f thanks
no problem french f thanks for reading and commenting all the best sueb x