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Sep 06, 2013
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BUZZ
BUZZ
Buzzards flying all around
heavy motion in the sky
wings hung low and sharp eye.
I keep two feet on the ground
sit but won't lie down..
— Geremia, Sep 06, 2013
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Rula
12 years 9 months ago
Sit but won't lie down
I can't see how this goes with the above lines, Joe.
Geremia
12 years 9 months ago
Buzzards go after dead meat--
Buzzards go after dead meat-- lying down is metaphor of death.
Rula
12 years 9 months ago
Thanks for the clarification
Nice use of the metaphor. Liked the title too.