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May 04, 2016
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BLACK WIDOW
BLACK WIDOW
1946
A large black-rimmed hat and
black silk veil covered her face
of ruby red lips and piercing dark eyes,
and a smile that betrayed her lies
she walked across the grass
in mourning black, in a sensual dance
swaying hips in motions slow.
she was a friend to many men,
and married some who never did see
more than one rising sun.
— Geremia, May 04, 2016
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jane210660
10 years ago
I blooming well love this. Jx
I blooming well love this. Jx
Geremia
10 years ago
thanks, Jx ! :)
thanks, Jx ! :)
lovedly
10 years ago
U GO back to 1946
were u born then in 1941
i wonder Joe
do let me know
I will guide what next to sow
YOUR NERVOUS SYSTEM WILL
grow
Geremia
10 years ago
oct. 19, 1942
oct. 19, 1942
lovedly
10 years ago
good Joe
If you can let me also
your time of birth know
then see what i say
believe it or not
its upto ye
friendly Joe
19th are born leaders
and ur a Libra also
world renowned Joe
was It
SUNDAY/ MONDAY NIGHT?