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Jun 22, 2012
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BARREN NIGHTS
BARREN NIGHTS
The night came upon me
barren
no nurturing light
no warmth in its darkness
stars veiled in black embrace
meaningless to its own existence.
mirrored reflection....
— Geremia, Jun 22, 2012
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loved
14 years 1 month ago
nice one
'''stars veiled in black embrace.....
nice choice of words too
Geremia
14 years 1 month ago
I am very happy you enjoyed
I am very happy you enjoyed this one.
Ian.T
14 years 1 month ago
Joe
I like this one as an intro to more, you have given us a glimpse of one part of being there and as Loved said the words chosen are good..
I just felt that there is more to this one, Yours Ian.T
Geremia
14 years 1 month ago
Strike with words and images
Strike with words and images surreal and leave the reader stunned or dismayed, Pull out an emotion.
Nordic cloud
14 years 1 month ago
Beautifully neat this now.
Beautifully neat this now.
It makes a new stunning whole that I like a lot.
Anni :)
Geremia
14 years 1 month ago
[wink]
[wink]
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