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Sep 17, 2011
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APOCALYPSE
APOCALYPSE
a sudden madness seized Mankind
the sane scattered in fear for theiir mind
Insanity in violent pursuit
and the gates of Heaven swung open
floodiing the skies thunderous red
a procession of angels
black wings spread
followed lines of marching dead
singing in Excelso Deo
and across the universe
laughter was heard again
— Geremia, Sep 17, 2011
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Geremia
14 years 10 months ago
Yes. Then I succeeded in
Yes. Then I succeeded in relating the image. :
joe
Geremia
14 years 10 months ago
If there is Good, there is
If there is Good, there is Evil. One term defines the other.
Thank you, Rosinella.
Hooded Stranger
14 years 10 months ago
Joe
Joe,
you know I like this one and it is that last line I enjoy the most...who's laughter? Good or evil?
regards,
HS
Geremia
14 years 10 months ago
Dan
Who laughed? "And then the gates of Heaven swung open...."
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