ABOUT HEARTS AND CLOCKS

Beats of the heart
tick tock like a clock
and mesmerized
we sway
to the rhythm of each day.
as the years move on
we fall behind
and all too quickly
we slowly fade away.

— Geremia, Oct 24, 2012

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Seren

13 years 7 months ago

Dearest Joe

I want more lol I really liked what you have here, I dont have any suggestions for the above I felt its complete for now but if I was you I would consider making more of this poem ... kudos

love and hugs your Jayne-Chloe xxx

Geremia

13 years 7 months ago

My poetry has becme very

My poetry has becme very short. fgure t hat the less wrte the less trouble I wll get nto LOL

I have a book publishedd AMAZON KNDLE ettled "When all the walls colme tumbling down" nder the name LONGO-GEREMIA

I am housebound now, my Jane, mostly in wheel chair, constant pain. But writng makes my days easier.ANDI AM STILL A GDDDAMN HANDSOME HUNK at 70 .

Love t you, my Jane.

Seren

13 years 7 months ago

Giggle

I am just a greedy cow I always want more of a good story or poem :)

I will look your book up !! congratulations !!

I am sorry to hear your house bound my friend if you ever get bored just email me I am still a night owl ill message you my email address if you dont still have it

much love your Jayne xxx

Geremia

13 years 7 months ago