williej

Member since November 25, 2018

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Pigeons’ Flight, A Nice Sight

Posted Aug 23, 2022 · 13 lines

I’m like a little boy enjoying
The sight of pigeons’ flight
They fly off on the clear and blue skies
The skies' vastness is their playground
to pass, dive, and coo to their hearts’ desire.
Look at them; they don't plant or
toil, but our God feeds them.
Not even one of them will fall
Without His knowing.
So, why are we humans being warned
Not to feed them, to simply ignore them.
I still envy these pigeons; why?
They can fly away to their heart's content, and I cannot.

williej’s timeline

November 2023
25 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
August 2022
23 Tue

Posted a poem
Pigeons’ Flight, A Nice Sight
"I’m like a little boy enjoying"
Open thread 13 lines
July 2022
27 Wed

Received a critique
on Waiting from @c lynn brooks
"What will happen when you do meet at last will you meet each others expectations? Nice bit of writing"
25 Mon

Posted a poem
Waiting
"Waiting for you to come, but when?"
Open thread 15 lines
February 2022
23 Wed

Received a critique
on "I Don't Want to Sleep Yet" from @Candlewitch
"I agree with Geezer's comments. it does feel like internet love...however love happens is all good! there is also a trace of sorrow here... *hugs, Cat"
20 Sun

Received a critique
on "I Don't Want to Sleep Yet" from @Geezer
"Is this Internet love? I get the feeling that it is. The language is good, and the pacing done well. If the theme is as I've said, it reads perfectly. The beginning and the end are fine, with the ending being a resoluti…"
19 Sat

Posted a poem
"I Don't Want to Sleep Yet"
"My Dear, every time I tell you to go to bed early"
Open thread 9 lines
November 2019
25 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
November 2018
25 Sun

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
August 2008
07 Thu

First publication
Is this life all there is?